"S E R E N D I P I T Y" {reviews} (OPEN)

Description

A place for you to bring stories to be reviewed, with a focus on constructive criticism. 

 

Foreword

Hey Everyone! I hope you are doing well~

I thought It would be fun to try and start reviewing for everyone, yes? So here we are, you , me , and nice fresh new review shop.

Oh that reminds me would anyone be interested in oneshots as well? I can add that to here if you want hehehe~ I don't mind doing them. 

It might take me a while to get a nice layout setup, so I'm sorry, yes? 

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So as far as my reviewing goes I have to say I'm focused more on providing feedback and constructive criticism rather than providing you a score.

In fact, I probably wont even score you, unless you really want a score. 

Here's how it goes. 

In the comments section fill out this form.

Author:

Title:

Rating:

Genre:

Focus Areas:

 

Now in the "Focus Areas" section I want you to tell me what you want me to focus on. Is it your characterization? Plot? Style or grammar? Fill it in.

Or conversely, leave it blank for a general review. 

 

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Now that you've done that, give me a day or two to read it and review. I accept not only oneshots, but chaptered fics as well, although those shall take longer to complete. 

I'll post it here with your name in the chapter title, and send you a message.

subscribing is not mandatory, but would be awesome if you did.

so send in your request below! okay?

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HIRING~

If you want to work with me on this as a reviewer, then just send me a message and we'll talk, yes?

Comments

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ilabya30 #1
interesting~
TheLandofBrownSugar #2
Author: TheLandofBrownSugar

Title: Behind the Mask

Rating: It's not rated; not need to.

Genre: Romance.

Review: Everything, please! ^^

Thank you in advance!
seouljaboy #3
author; ememyang
title; an angel's embrace
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/431492
rating; not rated, a few swear words
genre; oneshot, angst
focus area; plot and grammar~~
takeflightbirdy #4
Chapter 4: Woo thanks for the review! and the advice :) I shall apply it!
Emanon_
#5
oh and mind giving me an overall score? in Language /100 and plot? :0 /100? thanks <333
Emanon_
#6
ayy :3 here for a review

Author:Emanon_
Title: Sweet Bitterness

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/140913/sweet-bitterness-angst-life-oneshot-oneshots-collections-seriesofdrabbles

Genre: collection of oneshots, angst
Focus Area: Plot, grammar, syle, the expressions and feelings portrayed in the stories(can you check if it's clear-how i expressed the story?) oh and if you don't mind, go all grammar nazi on me. i really want to know how to improve my writing X.X

thanksss <333
rezka_r07
#7
Hi, I request!

Author : rezka_r07
Title : Decision
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/375761/decision-dbsk-donghae-jay-siwon-superjunior-trax
Genre : Friendship, Family, Crime
Focus Areas : Plot, grammar, style, and anything you need to say. I really want to know what do you think about my story :)

Thank you.
peachysoo
#8
Chapter 3: Ah, thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :) I do agree with your points about how I structure my sentences as it's an ongoing struggle to find a good ebb and flow to them and to keep myself from over using commas or run-on sentences. So I appreciate that you were able to notice that. And I'm glad you thought the pacing of the story was good, because I was a little bit worried with some of the scenes that I highlighted along the way. And thank you for the praise, I did my best to keep things as realistic as possible for the story. I dislike it when people don't do research or handle heavy subject matters well, so I spent a lot of time going over things and researching to make sure I wasn't doing a disservice to the subject matter.

I may write some heavier subject matter in the future, but as of right now, I'll be immersing myself in my long term horror project I'm writing.

Thanks for the feedback and taking the time to read and review my story. It's very appreciated.
GreenGardenPop
#9
Author: GreenGardenPop
Title: Heartfelt Voice http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/413941/
Rating: Non-rated
Genre: Fantasy
Focus Areas: Characterization
Thanks...