Rusting Kyungsoo

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Kyungsoo loves Jongin, but he loves that guy too. Jongin wants to make him understand. Jongin needs to make Kyungsoo see that things are just already ed-up between them; everything is just so rusted—love and even Kyungsoo himself.

 
 
 
Title: Rusting Kyungsoo
Pairing: Kaisoo
Genre: Angst-ish
Word Count: ~1500
 
 
 

 

 

Foreword

 
 

“Why?” I find my voice betraying me. I’ve thrown the ball yet I know I won’t have the guts to catch it back. How ing coward of me.

 

“It’s because I love– ”

 

“Stop,” I cut with desperation. I know. Stupid Jongin, you already know it so what the is that question for?

 

“You… you love him,” I whisper and it’s an irony how I’ve stopped him just moments ago yet it is me who has summarized his answer in the end.

 

 

 

Author's Notes:
 
This is a piece-offering dedicated especially to my
subscribers who are (I don’t know but I’ll assume you
do hahaha) disappointed about my status regarding
Intermittent Pour. Here! I have crafted a
one-shot for you! I’m just so particularly remorseful so
I figured I should do this plus I’ve also been wanting
to try writing something Jongin-centric, so I hope
you like this!
 
Feel free to express your thoughts and criticisms
– especially criticisms – and I’ll gladly embrace them.
Tell me particularly if I improved on my writing coz I badly need assessment or something. Haha!
 
I stood victorious against the blue-screening side of my laptop! YAY! Be proud of me!
Hahahaha. Thanks for your love, sweets. So long!
 
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SPECIAL THANK YOU FOR THE HONEST REVIEWS
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     Seriously, this is like my
     HIGHEST SCORE EVER.
  *Featured 5/03 yeah*
 
 
     

 
MORE SPECIAL THANKS TO
for the wonderful poster! I will be forever indebted to
for her altruistic devotion to mankind and for her
awesomeness as well.

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Story dedication to these lovelies who never get tired
of me and my weird(zombie-)ness. Hiyah guys, SURPRISE! XD
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
namulwie                                                                                lovexo_xo
(I LOVE YOU MUM.)
 
                                              mykismet

 

I'm just so sorry if this isn't to your liking. And LOL, please don't be so scared of this dedication.
Just really want to appreciate you. OHMYGOD, I'm crying.
See? I'm such a cute zombie. XD
 
Special mention to immutable, jcpenny001, Yukira1980 and others (ohgod I'm so sorry
for not including you here) for their constant support to my stories. Hey guys, don't be scared too.
I'm just being a clingy author to my subscribers. LOL. Thank you!
 
NOTE (05/15/13):
I decided to change the title from "Rust and Metal" to "Rusting Kyungsoo".
I thought it's more appropriate. Thank you for understanding!

 

Author's Thoughts
threecheers
Rust and Metal: I know I said I will post it ASAP but I want to wait for my poster first. LOL. Don't curse me, I just want to make it better and all. XD
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Laoxin #1
Chapter 1: T-T aAKJLSJG *applauds*
thevanillamhieudhie #2
Chapter 1: Can I cry? OKAY, . THIS IS BROKEN AND AND ANGST THAT RIPS MY HEART INTO PIECES.

Thanks for a beautiful masterpiece, continue to make great kaisoo fics. :-):-):-)
sparkl3ysparx #3
Chapter 1: I had the feeling it was Jongin/Kai hurting Kyungsoo when he said, "Please, don't come to him anymore." Answered by "We'll - I'll try." Is Kyungsoo broken as well and split between himself ad D.O.? Or were those grammatical errors?
awkwardtofu211 #4
your brilliance in writing amazes me :)
At first I was like, why would Jongin want Kyungsoo to leave him? But then I realized the twist :)
This is so so good author-nim!
I upvoted for you! You totally deserve it.
birds_ #5
Chapter 1: oh wow. ... I... well, it's rare that some fics left me speechless, but this one did it.
(it seems I'm not the only one x'])
zaazeezuu #6
Chapter 1: ok..duo personality? isnt?
it what i understand from my reading...
pixie_yeol #7
Chapter 1: what can i say about this fic... I'm actually kind of speechless right now...

It was beautiful, almost like poetry and the imagery in it was amazing. The writing was as delicate as the characters. It was perfectly angsty and heartbreaking and the twist at the end was really well done, I didn't see it coming at all!

I'd happily name this as one of my favourite kaisoo fics, I'm a er for these kind of oneshots :)

-curls up in a corner and cries- Jongin~ Poor baby~
spicastellar #8
Chapter 1: what what what oh myyyy
this is this is this is..
*sigh*
poor KaiSoo!
oh double personality :(
but really, I cant see that coming!
it was a great, like great, surprise..

and LOL I was laughing reading your foreword!
what is this zombie thingy you talk about Em?
nekotrina #9
Chapter 1: I've been drowning in bad fanfiction lately and I was checking out my friends' fanfiction and you're my friend here and I found this and boom

I love it. I like how Jongin described every moment like.. ah like that...

And yeah I was suspecting that 'twist' all along. It's kind of nice actually. Good job ^___^
lizryan #10
Chapter 1: OMG. I really didn't expect this twist at all.
At first i'm like 'why is kyungsoo still holding on to that guy?'
and then I find it weird when he call out Kai instead of Jongin.
Then it hits me, Kai is Jongin and the other guy is Kai.
So it was him all along and he didn't know? :'(

This is really interesting :) and I really love it ♥
I LOVE KAISOO AND NOW I LOVE YOU TOO!!!
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