What Really Counts, Is Our Moment

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Hey! ^-^ 

Here is another one-shot by me, written out of boredom! I tried to include a bit of comedy here, but I don't know if it worked.. :') I am such a hopeless romantic, forgive me haha..

Enjoy and please comment and tell me what you think! :) I want to know what I should improve and what is good or bad about my writing..Thank youu! <3

So, Jiyong and YB are on the beach..

Foreword

He always saw what was coming. But what about the moment?

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munmun27 #1
Chapter 1: found this one a little too late, but better late than never, right? I love it so much, thanks for a cute story!
foreverYB518 #2
So cute and sweet! I love it! My GDYB feels!
BehnazYB
#3
Chapter 1: that was so sweet and beautifull, i love it.
thank you for sharing.
taecbae
#4
Chapter 1: This is soo sweet >< i love this so much ^o^
OTY_DYB
#5
Chapter 1: i love this :D
MyLactobacillus
#6
Omg! That ws cutee~~♥ love your GDYB stories~~~♥ thanks for sharing ...
moon_swan #7
Chapter 1: It was so simply beautiful! :)
minrin2001
#8
Chapter 1: That's so sweet!:3 Hope you write more GDYB one shot.(: