Chapter 1: Oh my god, I don't usually read fics of this fandom but I've begun to grow fond of Kaistal lately. Most of the kaistal I read are angsty and ugh, it's a good kind of frustration that I feel right now. ;;
This was really, really good. I've actually read a lot about the whole Kai/Jongin and Krystal/Soojung personnas, but I think you pulled it off quite well.

Chapter 1: T.T so sad and touching! I loved it ♥♥

Chapter 1: This is simply amazing and I love the angst! You did not fail horribly! Only one problem. Whenever you end a paragraph you have the sentence in parentheses. I'm not sure why because the sentence fit within the context of the paragraph, so it's not an extra thought like parantheses would notify. Eiter way, it didn't affect tye brilliance of your writing, just my opinion! Good job!

I love Kaistal trainee stories :)
I love angst too, haha. You write very well and the characterization is great. I hope you win!

Chapter 1: This is so good, I really like it. Especially the way you displayed their feelings, it was extremely impactful. I didn't know if Krystal ever loved Kai, but he was her only companion and her presence meant so much to him. It was really nice to see Kai's undying love for her even when she was driven insane. Indeed a great piece of work, love it! <3

Oh my god I actually have no words to say that can do justice to this. I really love fics that touch about the Jongin/Kai and Soojung/Krystal personas. I've come across several fics about their trainee days, but this one really caught me off guard. My heart breaks for Krystal because sometimes I really do worry about her, if she can keep up, she can face all the burdens and expectations, if she's about to crumble any time soon since despite everything she's still so young. I love the emotions in this, and the angst! This is an incredible piece of work. All the best for the contest :)

Chapter 1: sobx this is so good ;A;

Chapter 1: you just broke my kaistal heart. thank you very much :')