Blunt Honesty: A Review Shop [CLOSED. AT LEAST UNTIL MOTIVATION COMES BACK. (except The Avocado)]

Description

We're bluntly honest about how fail (or good) your fics are.
but we're trying to help you improve

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Foreword

"Yet another review shop," you say?

Well. Yes.

Just like a lot of other shops, we're going for brutal honesty because we're all avid readers with relatively high standards and a decent grasp of the English language. We're not the best writers, but we hope to help you be better (because, as previously mentioned, we're avid readers).
 
Of course, we can also sugarcoat, because our goal isn't to discourage people from writing.
 

Blunt Honesty. Review shop. Welcome.

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► Shop Status

            ☑open - ☐ busy - ☐ closed - ☐ under construction - ☐ hiring

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► Rules

  • subscribe, because otherwise it's difficult to track you/your story
  • comment after recieving review
  • give us at least a week to look over and complete a review
  • put your application as a comment
  • these reviews take our time and effort, so please credit us somewhere in your story; preferably in the foreword or description.

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► Review Status

ememyang • An Angel's Embrace • In Progess (Lia)

slat101 • Nostalgia • Pending (Lia)

HerLovelyWinterRose • Finding you. • Pending (Lee)

AshesAngel • Birthday Suprise • Pending (Lee)

selline • Miss No Label • In-Progress (Lee)

theNSO • My Engineered Life! • Completed
asianswagg • Push, Play, Rewind • Completed
Crys_Marie2oo5 • Miles Away • Completed
theloveinlife • A Price To Pay • Completed
deibaby03 • Do Love Your Neighbors • Completed
kimjong-deul • First Kiss • Completed
huhudad • We Grew Up • Completed
rhienz03 • Just a Substitute • Completed
AkatCuties • EXO Division • Completed
GreenGardenPop • Heartfelt Voice • Completed
clumsyblue • The Tournament • Completed
ToneHarmonic • The Days Before  • Completed
riraitoe • word:kill • Completed
GothicMermaid • For Better Or For Worse • Completed
KatyMikayla • Key to Her Soul • Completed
jelly_donut • Count On Me • Completed
GreenGardenPop • Silent Night • Completed
Milky-chan • That Odd Feeling • Completed

 

(Key: pending = received but not started, (requested reviewer), (errors with application), single spaced list = received review and commented, crossed off = author commented after receiving review and we are credited in the story. the review process is finished)

Author's Thoughts
unnamed1demannu
[BH:aRS] Posted review for asianswagg: Push, Play, Rewind
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Panda-Chu #1
Chapter 8: So... you guys still closed?
theNSO #2
Chapter 19: okay , read them ! Thank you and sorry for taking your time . lol . I'll try to improve and yeah , I took 10 classes at once here haha not mentioning the minor subjects . haha XD
theNSO #3
Chapter 1: username: theNSO
profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/322875
story name: My Engineered Life !
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/426298
preferred reviewer: The Avocado (Corrupted-Rainbows)
comments: English isn't my first language :) I hope you can help me to point out my grammatical error , beautify my vocab , and also please tell me if the plot is too fast or too slow , etc .Thanks !
rhienz03 #4
Chapter 18: Thank you for your honest review. I really appreciate it. It made me reflect on my writing. Thanks again.

BTW, I already credited you in my story. Once again, thanks for being honest. ^^
kanqwu #5
Chapter 1: username: slat101
profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/49349
story name: Nostalgia
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/409854/nostalgia-angst-oneshot--jinchan
preferred reviewer: unnamed1demannu
comments: I'm a bit apprehensive about whether or not the storyline is too choppy and broken up, so feedback on that will really help. Any suggestions and input are fine with me and I'm excited to get a blunt, honest review :3
-pastels #6
Hello~
Would you like to be affies? ^^
[ http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/433560/pastel-love-request-shop-hiring-apply-now-oneshot-request-hiring-reviews-requestshop-reviewshop-oneshotshop ]
seouljaboy #7
Chapter 1: username: ememyang
profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/313940
story name: An Angel's Embrace
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/431492/an-angel-s-embrace-angst-oneshot-romance-originalcharacter-kai-jongin
preferred reviewer:(please be aware of whether a reviewer already has an assignment; if so, then your story may take longer.) Lia
comments: (optional- e.g. something you want us to focus on, if English isn't your first language, anything really) English is my first language so.. feel free to bash me as much as you want XD
AkatCuties #8
Chapter 17: Thank you for the review, although I'm not sure how to implement the advice you've given me :P I was planning on ending the fic soon...

And I've credited you :)
KatyMikayla #9
Chapter 15: I just wanted to note something here:
"Also, what kind of teacher would lock a student into a closet?"
Actually... a lot of teachers do in Asia. There have been many reported cases when the child was left in the closet and died.
rhienz03 #10
Chapter 1: username: rhienz03
profile link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/73204
story name: Just a Substitute
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/424389
preferred reviewer: I don't really prefer anyone.
comments: Nothing, I just love it when people are honest.
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