I'll wait ... No Matter How Much

Description

The day was seeming to be perfect for Sun Mi, nevertheless its day was far from being perfect... she did not know that today it was going to be one of the worst days of its life.... 

 
¿Ji Yong, what is this?
 
 
 
 
 

Foreword

 

Hello. I am a writer of fics in Spanish, I have translated my first one-shot in English. Sorry if the translation is not good, English is not my mother tongue. Nevertheless I did my best effort to publish it in this language. Thanks for moved forward, if they go so far as to read this history. This history was born based on a dream that I had. enjoy it...
 
P.S: I did the banner.
 

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didoe84
#1
Chapter 1: Okay I usually dont read anything but GTOP but since it was you..... I make the effort of reading it and I'll comment honestly.... It's probably the first story you translated in english and honestly it looks like you used google trad or something, that's difficult to read because the words aren't in the right order and sometimes the sentences are weird cut or sound weird.... I'ts pretty disturbibin how you mix 3rd and 1rst pov too... but I know translation is a really difficult work since you have to change the language you think into so frequently.... I don't now, I could only advice to re-read your translation after you completely done it so you'll maybe able to correct it....
But I still could understand it and the feelings you tried to convey moreover the images you used are beautiful!! sincerely it touched me it was so desesperate!!!! btw I wonder what kind of crime GD had done to be sentenced to 20 years of prison and forbidden from visit?