The Sound of Silence

Description

Title: The Sound of Silence
Pairing: Ontae
Rating: PG-13 (language and a slightly y dream~)
Warnings: Fluff, slightly angsty
Summary: In which Taemin is a mute loner partially by choice and partially due to an accident as a child, Onew is the new kid who somehow wiggles into his heart, and Kibum is a sassy, supportive best friend.

Foreword

A/N: THIS FIC IS MY BABY AND A MONSTER. It's the first thing I ever started writing as fanfiction, and I finally. finished..... I'll edit it later.

 

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SHIN33ee #1
Chapter 1: This is amaaaaaaaazing! <333333
YukiOrikasa #2
Chapter 1: So sweet ! I love this!
BreyBrey #3
Chapter 1: Sweet and beautiful...
onewxjjong #4
Chapter 1: this is a great characterization of onew omg this was so good i cried. 10/10
Daisyflor #5
Chapter 1: "So this tree, huh?"
shinyan #6
"His voice is like music."

Is this not how all of us feel? His voice literally causes my heart to stop even when I have heard the song (any song) a thousand times. MVP or not, Shawol or not, no one can dislike it.

And, this whole fic was beautiful and fluffy and a joy the whole way through, and your ontae affection is gloriously sweet and pure and lovely. The entire paragraph about their kiss - I may dare say that was the sweetest first kiss (quite possibly any kiss) description I have ever read -- "soft and chaste like petals", "they simply meld together for what feels like both a moment and an eternity", "He decides Onew is perfect for hugging as well as kissing" -- Literally the best kiss I have ever read in all the fanfics I've read thus far. I can't get over it. That this is your first fic, is astonishing.
moshiznik #7
Chapter 1: awww that was so cute! i loved the ending :)
AnimeFreak4412 #8
Chapter 1: Oh my gosh!!! I really love your story~! It's so good. You're a really really great author!!!! :D
ixButterfly #9
Chapter 1: Aww, this was sweet!
I knew Tae was going to say "I love you" at the end lol ♥
kyseobie #10
That was beautiful
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