The Last Petal Falls

Our Bounded Promise

 

 

"I'm glad your here" Jiyoung said with a smile

"Of course I'll be here!!"Luhan said smiling."You worried me!"

Jiyoung nodded and look at Luhan."How are you?"

Luhan look at her and smile"I'm good,don't worry about me"

Jiyoung nodded."Can you get me an apple?".She requested while pointing at the fruit basket

Luhan smiled and took an apple and a knife and starts peeling the apple with a  smile

"Why are you smiling?" Jiyoung ask

"It's nothing"Luhan said and shake his head slowly

"Oh yeah!,Cause I see that smile again!"Jiyoung teased Luhan.Luhan just keep smiling

"It's just that....I've always wanted to do this with my"Luhan look at Jiyoung and stop then goes back peeling the apple with his eyes glued to the apple

"With who?"Jiyoung repeatedly ask

Luhan look at Jiyoung again."With my girlfriend" Luhan shyly said.Jiyoung smiled and then giggled

"Why are you considering me as one?"Jiyoung ask like a little girl.Luhan just rub the back of his neck

"You boys.Do we girls always have to make the first move?"Jiyoung giggled

Luhan just released a huge sigh with a smile following it.

"Come on! Do I have to be the one asking? Do you really want me to be the one asking here?"Jiyoung ask while raising an eyebrow

Luhan smile rubbing the back of his neck more.

"Fine!Don't!"Jiyoung said and acted like she's mad

"No!No! I'll do it!"Luhan rushly said.He released another big sigh

"Do you...." He shyly ask." Do you want to be with me??"

"Finally! The words I've been waiting"Jiyoung shyly said"Of course,I'll be glad to".She hug Luhan.resting her head at his chest

"I've always wanted to do this with my boyfriend" Smiling widely.Luhan just hug her tightly.

 

-At Night-

Jiyoung's mom and dad where ask to go to Sulli's house.

"Sulli-yah,what's wrong honey?"Jiyoung's mom ask,entering the big house with Jiyoung's dad

"Ah Mrs. Kan,thank you for coming"Sulli said welcoming them

"This is my dad"Sulli introduced.

"Please sit down and have a drink" Sulli's dad requested and Jiyoung's parents nodded,sitting in the couch

"Is there something wrong?" Jiyoung's mom ask

"No.There's nothing wrong.But more like we want to help Jiyoung" Sulli's dad said

"What do you mean?" Jiyoung's dad ask

"well you see,Sulli's been talking about your daughter ever since she met her,and knowing what she is goin through,I want to help"Sulli's dad said

"You see,I have a friend of mine who is in the States and is a good doctor,the hospital he's working at is special for it's technology that can cure Jiyoung's illness and with a greater chance of success" Sulli's dad futher explained

"So you want Jiyoung,to go to the States to get cured?"Jiyoung's dad ask.

"Don't worry,I'll be here to help you in the process" Sulli's dad said

"Honey,that's great! We need to do this,for jiyoung!"Jiyoung's mom said to her husband

"We'll do it! anything just to get Jiyoung cured" Jiyoung's dad said

 

-At the sametime,at the hospital-

Jiyoung is drinking her medicine when suddenly,her heart started aching,she drop the glass she was holding and the nurse rush to her room.She's having an attack.The nurse hurriedly ask for a docotr and brought her to the emergency room.The other nurse call her parents

"Hello?"Jiyoung's mom ask the other line

"Hello?Mrs. Kang,you need to get here.You daughter is in the emergency room1"The nurse said

"What?!" Jiyoung's mom said in astonishment.then she hungs up

"Honey!Jiyoung's in the emergency room!" Jiyoung's mom said crying.

"What!?,Let's go!" Jiyoung's dad said.

"What!? dad I need to go with them!!" Sulli said

"No Sulli,not without Myungsoo.I don't want you to go there by yourself" Sulli's dad said"Wait here for Myungsoo,then go to the hospital"

"But dad!" Sulli coplained but stop

 

After a couple of minutes Myungsoo came and they both went to the hospital

The both of them rush to the emergency room just when she saw Jiyoung's mom crying and Jiyoung's dad in a blank sitting on the floor.

"Oh No!!" Sulli said and turn around crying quietly in Myungsoo."Why did this happen!!" She kepps on repeating.Then Sulli ran away outside the hospital,crying hard.Myungsoo follow her outside

 

-At Jiyoung's dream-

She is in the same wide field again.She run to the beautiful rose.The Last petal is hanging.And then it's like time stop as the last petal falls.Her breathe is like taken away by the moment.Then the same wind pass her and the last beautiful petal also goes with the wind.And just like that Jiyoung smiled.It's like something is finally done.

 

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Letterofspring #1
Chapter 15: There my JingHan<3<3
inspirit501
#2
Chapter 15: i will wait for you nxt story coz im MYUNGJING shipper !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDD
vinmya86 #3
Chapter 15: the ending so happy and sweet xD
vinmya86 #4
Chapter 12: omo..jiyoung! just go to hospital will you?? something bad gonna happen :(
vinmya86 #5
Chapter 11: you doing great KARA!! cant wait myungsoo perform with his band xD
vinmya86 #6
Chapter 10: aww,Luhan you skip school for jiyoung >.< that so sweet of you. and Jiyoung you so happy right?! cant wait next chappie xD
inspirit501
#7
Chapter 10: when everyone want jiyoung with luhan but why me want jiyoung with myungsoo ? Huhuhu . Btw , thankyu for the update . Waiting for nxt :) fighting !
dignifiedflower
#8
Chapter 9: Authornim ! I hope you put Jing and Luhan together !
And please dont make Jiyoung die !! ><
vinmya86 #9
Chapter 9: fighting jiyoung-ah!! take care of yourself okay :) i'm wonder and excited if Luhan going appears again??
vinmya86 #10
Chapter 9: fighting jiyoung-ah!! take care of yourself okay :) i'm wonder and excited if Luhan going appears again??