Chapter 1: This is great! I especially love Kai and Krystal's relationship. It reminds me of Chuck and Blair's. And like the others, I'm confused too. Not about the ending, but rather your description. Somewhere in the middle of the story (I forgot which part), your description was unclear that I had to re-read it 3 times. But all in all, I still think it's an amazing fic. There's a mystery to it :)

Chapter 1: my ot4. one of my favorite of all time.

Chapter 1: I'm confused. You have great writing. That's always a plus in this site. You have good details, descriptions, and story telling capabilities. But the story itself left me wondering.

I didn't know who it was that we were suppose to ROOT for.

I didn't comprehend Myungsoo, didn't he want to go to Paris? Did he go, did he not, what did he want...actually, no, WHO he did truly want? Who did he truly love. What HAPPENED? Maybe you wanted us to use our imagination to fill up the pieces, but we weren't given enough material to get WHY the characters made the decision they did.

I mean, I enjoy MyungZy, but I definitely wasn't hoping she'd end up with the guy. She seems like one of those shady/fake "I'm sweet but I'm not" girls. That conversation her and Krystal had made me roll my eyes at her and not support her. I rather Myungsoo, if he was to end up with anyone, ended up with someone else. It didn't have to be Krystal if that wasn't what you wanted, simply some other girl other than Suzy.

Kai and Krystal, did they love each other? They seemed random and not serious. Or at least, there wasn't enough connection between the two to make me go for them. Why would Krystal give up Myungsoo for him?

I mean, how could everyone be so happy and how could Suzy and Krystal still be friends (let alone marry Myung) when history probably repeated itself with the Paris situation? There's a forgiving and kind heart and then there's just being stupid. I don't think there was enough material to really make that ending truly ring, it seemed pulled together quick for no other reason than to make that unexpected twist...if it was. Or put the winning couples to fulfill the "happy" for whoever ships them without strong basis behind it and let the quote speak.

The finale left me with "huh" rather than a "yay"(happy) or a "nay"(not happy). For advice, I'd say work on character relationships more to make sense of what the result would be. Give more EXPOSITION. I'll try to reread.

Chapter 1: THIS IS GORGEOUS your writing is just so beautiful but do you know what hurts the most? I'm a huge shipper of myungzy and kaistal so I thought I would be extremely happy to see myungsoo and suzy end up together and to see kai and krystal end somewhat together but instead I ended up wishing myungsoo and krystal would be together lol my heart has betrayed me but anyways I really enjoyed this beautiful piece I hope you will write more myungzy there one of my ultimate ships :D <33333 xxxxxxxx

Chapter 1: This is so cool but it confuses me at the same time
L loves Krys but in the end he married to Suzy
Krys did accept Kai's proposal and still in the end she doesnt married to him and watch L and Suzy happily married?????

So complicated but ur writing is so awesome and plzz write more Myungstal sng Kaistal ff :)

Chapter 1: oooh! i read this in lj before. didn't know you had aff? question tho: did myungsoo ever love krystal? i have the sinking feeling he did but maybe not as much to fight for her? and naaaaw kaistal. :<