Dead Stars

Description

Stars that appear presently to the eye on the sky are already dead. They are light years away from us, and are long gone.

Foreword

For Abby, whose ideas always ruin my life.

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nicorobin
#1
Wow what is this why I didn't read this sooner why it only has so little views and subscribers why why why the world needs to know about this fic.

At first I was wondering, "Okay, who's turn to be dead now?" But I didn't expect the death to be that soon .___.

The best part about this fic is the life's lesson that we can learn. It's simple but meaningful. It makes me think...

Thank you for writing this.
Moonmika
#2
Chapter 1: It's always like that.. You will somehow realized you want it once u lost it.. :(
Hiimee
#3
Chapter 1: sad cause of Bomi death
but the fic was precious, your write is always clear and good

Hoya think of 'how life would be with Nana' but he loves Bomi all the time, he realised that only now
poor of him :// stay alone in the world
thenostalgist
#4
Chapter 1: I got the point. Ergh.
Hoya did think of Nana even he is already with Bomi (well, married.)
And I experienced that too, like, mistakingly thought of something bigger when it is just a part of my illusion from the past that can't leave off my mind.
Still, i'm happy (but not the dead part. ;A;) and still sad too for Hoya to realize that it is actually Bomi the whole time.

I just know one thing: I will never stop shipping Homi.

And, really, im so happy you did let me know! let me say this once, iloveyaaaa ~ Homi fighting!
Junseoh
#5
Chapter 1: This is soo true. We never knew what we got till its gone.
enrose #6
Chapter 1: Sometimes it's because it's too loud, or too strikingly obvious that you don't get the hint. Hoya was meant to be with Bomi. It was just there were things, simply left unresolved and so he wanted, or some part of him, wanted Nana. It was just a pity that by the time he did realise that it wasn't what he wanted, by the time he got the closure he wanted, he had possibly wasted so many opportunities. I couldn't be angry or upset with Hoya, not entirely. Feelings are a messy thing.

I think you just hit me right in the heart with HoMi - (also please stop killing off Bomi :()
thepencilskirts
#7
Chapter 1: "Who takes his hands when he feels cold and takes a walk under the cherry blossoms tree"

Because I love this sentence & everything that Bomi does for/with him. When it comes to homi, I could never imagine them being fancy because simplicity is really what makes them beautiful :3

Nana being the girl of his dream & bomi being the girl he was meant to be. Between red wishes & white destiny, being torn is inescapable. I won't blame hoya for his feelings because sometimes those kind of things do bound to happen but at least hoya did what's right, he stood by bbom's side until the day that she's gone.

The only thing that makes me a little sad is how hoya realized that the girl of his dream, his dream star isn't as bright as what he used to think & that only happened when bomi's gone :( His real star is dead & he's left with nothing but abundant of regrets :/

Thank you for this beautiful piece & all these ridiculous feels ♥
-eternal- #8
Chapter 1: I actually at giving comments now so I can't really write an essay :( but i still wanna leave you one cos its been awhile and cos i really like this (just like how i love all your other stories)

i can actually understand where Hoya is coming from - how you think you still want that person but turns out, you just miss the memories, but not the person itself (at least that's how i feel) it's really sad that you had to kill Bomi's character, but I guess it does give the story more impact, since the storyline is pretty simple (well its a one-shot afterall)

but sobss at the last line - it says it all; his true, real feelings :')
thepencilskirts
#9
CRYINGGGG WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO TO ME