Lingering

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He comes home from work at six in the evening, toeing off his shoes in the doorway and calling out Ryeowook's name. Sometimes Ryeowook's there to greet him, running out of the kitchen, out of breath and apron strings tied haphazardly around his waist, almost like an eager puppy.

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allikay
#1
Chapter 5: WAIT A MOMENT.

that was a mIRROR!
somehow it feels like... like kyuhyun turned schizo or something because he sees himself in the mirror but sees ryeowook's eyes (would mayyybe explain why Sungmin was so mad at him for trying to find Ryeowook in places he can't be found [in kyuhyun himself]), and he takes meds, but on the other hand, there was this accident and the hospital and ryeowook & kyu don't really mirror each other's actions..
This all "ryeowook is leaving" thing happens when kyuhyun actually takes his meds... like you wrote that kibum forced pills down his throat.. and so, Ryeowook's leavings are only temporary because the meds will weaken eventually and he'll be able to be with Ryeowook again, until he has to take new pills.

can't still decide if kyuhyun is schizo or if he just sees Ryeowook's ghost XD or maybe both O.o

well
sometimes it takes a year to come with new conclusions! XD
i hope you'd help me with this cause my brain is really messy right now haha ^^;
ELFparin
#2
Chapter 5: i read this for ..like five times already and i only realized this time what the last sentence means..
allikay
#3
Chapter 5: Sooooo beautiful !
Everything was fantastic. I think it took me three or four chapters to come to the conclusion that Ryeowook was dead. And gosh, poor Kyuie ><
I loved your descriptions ~ they were simple, yet so filled with passion, and you found just the right words for everything. It was a really wonderful story :)
KangGwisoon #4
Chapter 5: I'm running out of tissue, could somebody give me one? T_________T
this is maybe the saddest kyuwook fic I've ever read :'T I really love the way you describe how kyu feel about ryeowook and his presence T___T thanks for sharing /hug/
chiibiiluna #5
Chapter 5: This is sad honestly. But then again the way you describe every detail of it makes me a little hesitant to think that Ryeowook is actually dead already. But he is, right?? Poor Kyuhyunnie.

I hope you'd write a chaptered one because you're an excellent writer :)) Way to go author-ssi ^^
kyulovewook #6
Chapter 5: I'll be honest, I cried a bit reading this chapter.
U're good, write more ff soon.
Thanks for updating so fast.
kyulovewook #7
Chapter 4: It's soo sad. I actually had tears although it didn't fall....
Update soon I can't wait to read more.
superhuman #8
Chapter 3: He's just a figment of kyu's imagination, that's why kibum asked him about his medication. omg ;;;;;; looking forward to the next chapt :)