Chapter 1: I can't believe how you'd managed to crystalise the entire Neo!friendship into this short story! Each example was succinct yet aptly chosen, and when strung together really help weave a coherent image of how one supports the other. I love how you chose to highlight the specific roles in which the other takes, then complementing it with subtleties from the other. It's lovely to see a more realistic description of the life an idol must have, spinning the tale around the stress points the boys all face, yet with enough lightness in your words to draw away from how tough their life is, and instead focusing on how a friendship can be strengthen in such an environment. Overall, the flow was steady and smooth, and the descriptions sufficient without being neither too sparse nor enough to overwhelm the main concept; kudos on a great piece, dear author!

Chapter 1: I'm glad I found this fic, I find that I can really see all this going on. Being an idol is hard, and lifelongs should definitely be treasured. Leaders need their pillars too, afterall.

Chapter 1: For something as short and simply descriptive as this piece was, it was also very real and it evokes a lot of emotions in a small amount of time. Pride for the way N manages things; sadness for how even he too can be worn down; happiness for the way both he and Leo hold each other up in their vastly different ways; that deep, ading sense of camaraderie that just lives and breaths among them as a whole. Ironically, for all that N seems to bother and pester Leo, this is a rather beautiful explanation and really throws their relationship into an incredibly supportive light. It all makes sense too, which is even better.

Maybe it's just the way you describe the pressures and all the responsibility; how you throw light on the fact that sometimes, even the leader gets weak and needs someone to help take care of him. It's incredibly sweet the way you write them and how they are just... there for each other and you can feel it as you breathe life into their interactions. Like I said, it's incredibly touching and the way you end it just makes you smile like an idiot. Largely because I can totally see that happening and them being good with it that way.

I don't think N's character came off as awkward at all and really they both came through as strong, easy to recognize figures with their highs and lows; strengths and flaws. So thank you for sharing. ^_^

Chapter 1: seriously lovely <3 i love this to bits!

Chapter 1: This was so sweet! There were several times I smiled as I read this, I hope people understand this and learn to forgive Leo's 'different' behavior. This BROtp is the best!!!