Tear My Heart Out (Poem)

Perfection

i know it says complete but i wrote a poem a while ago and i think it suits this story pretty well

 

 

It tears my heart out that you’d cry

Because of me, when I say good-bye

When you see me in betrayal

The sight of you, so cold, so frail

I couldn’t move, couldn’t breathe

Couldn’t seem to find my feet

To run to you, in your waiting arms

To be by your side, in safe or harm

I promised once, I’ll promise again

When you’re in need, you’ve got my hand

To hold, to help, to keep you up

On your feet, keep looking up above

Into the sky, the clear bright blue

Your eyes, in light, reflect that hue

I said it once, I’ll say it again

Forever and more, until the end

Side by side, more than a friend

We’ll be together, once and again

 

 

It tears my heart to see you cry

Because of me, you said good-bye

You left, in search of hope

You left me, dangling by a rope

Of despair, of sorrow, that you’d leave me so

That where you go, I’ll never know

In that moment, I realized it

That the two of us, we’re the perfect fit

Like two halves of a heart, like a key to a lock

The look in your eyes, whenever we talk

I should have noticed, should have seen

Should have known that we were meant to be

But now it hurts, that you say good-bye

And that because of me, you would cry

But don’t worry, I’ll be by your side

When it hurts, when the tears dry

I’ll kiss you, tell you that it’s alright

And that we’ll never part

Always and forever, side by side

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Danees #1
Chapter 2: Thank you!
DBanan
#2
Chapter 1: I loved you story so so so much it really did made me cry (๑o̴̶̷᷄﹏o̴̶̷᷄๑)
But one thing i think if you made it as I instead of you and my instead of yours it would be so much better :)
StormyDay #3
Chapter 2: OMG.
That was so amazing. The story and the poem.
you are really talented.
Thanks
AdventPhantom
#4
Chapter 2: That was so amazing!! The way it was written was gorgeous to me. First-person narratives from both sides made the story really intriguing. I could really see this being their story, in real life. If it ever happens. lol

And the poem reminded me of my love life, in a way. :-)
GirlSwag #5
Chapter 1: This was really good and I LMAO at Seungri!
Teletabi
#6
Chapter 1: oh my sweet lord.
I cried. No sobbing like a crazy person, just cried.
Tears streaming down my face as I continued reading this perfect piece of angst.
SilverMuse
#7
sorry, it's a bit confusing isn't it
it starts in Seunghyun's pov, sort of
then it switches to Jiyong, then back to Seunghyun, then to Jiyong again
SilverMuse
#8
i'll see if i can write some more when exams are over
or during the summer break when there's no more home work
i hate homework ToT
SilverMuse
#9
and thanks for the compliments everyone
this is my first fanfic ever and i'm glad that you all like it
thanks so much~
CKRRVIP
#10
Chapter 1: OMG.. This is REALLY perfection,, I love the way u tell the story.. Awww thanks for sharing <3