Undying Love

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This story is about the complicated love story of two persons.

There are many hindrances that crossed their ways...

They have been separated for 5 years...

Will they meet again?

If ever, will the playful hands of destiny go in their paths again?

Foreword

 

This is the first time that I'm writing a fanfiction.

I know that I'm not really a great writer and the words that I used may seem so simple, but I am proud of my work :)))

Originally, this story is something that I wrote in a group activity of one of my txt clans, but I enjoyed writing it so I made it a little bit more detailed and long.

I hope everyone will like it <3 <3

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MatsuNiChii #1
thanks for reading and commenting kachan!!! <3 <3

Ai____eru yo!! ^___^
momohoshi #2
Chapter 29: what a nice story...!!!!! i soooooo love this nak...!! this is just perfect...! though it is a bit tragic to the part of nina since all her relatives died but still, love find its way to tend her broken heart...and yuri(the stepbro) was right, they were just inside that heart and watching and loving you...


ow shems...! i can't hold my tears anymore...this story really went through me...!*sobs*

i can imagine the feeling of having all your loved ones being gone...and chinen yuri was your real guardian angel here nak...

i oh-so love this fic...!!!! i love this soooooooo much...!!!!!!!
momohoshi #3
Chapter 28: UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH...!! TT^TT

nak...! you made me cry in this chappy...really...!*sobs*
so that was the true story...! gomen ne chii for being mad at you a while ago...so you were not really bad after all...*wipes tears*

i never thought that their story would be like that...how on earth did you though about that nak...?it was so heart-touching and the part where yuri(the stepbro) sacrificed his heart, that broke my heart...! <////3
oh no...why am i being so emotional here...huhuhu TT^TT

i just so love this chappy...i love this...! i love this...! i love this...!!!!!
momohoshi #4
Chapter 27: uwaaaaaaaah~

this is so mysterious nak...i love mysterious types of stories...this is really getting so excited...! not i'll get the explanation that i'm waiting for when i read the next chappy...hahaha
momohoshi #5
Chapter 26: a;ldkajdaj;ldaj;ldls;laskak;


OW MY...! well, i can say that Chii here has two sides of him...i see the silent type chinen yuri and the noisy type chinene yuri...but what's best for him is to be the noisy one...! i'm not used to the silent-type yuri...hahaha xD


and the last part...!!! how mysterious of him...!

"Nina...I finally know where your brother is...He is here...Inside me"


shems...!!!!! i'm so hooked to this nak...!
momohoshi #6
Chapter 25: EMERGEEEEEEE...! EMERGEEEEEEEEEE...! EMERGEEEEEEEEEEEEE...! NAAAAAAAAAAAK...!!!!!

this is such a kawaii chappy...! i can imagine Chinen pouting as he said "you are such a stubborn girl" kawaii na~

and he even gave you his email...! kyaaaaah~
momohoshi #7
Chapter 24: hahaha

laptrip in "pretending-to-be-my-imouto-chan" thingy...!!!!! hahaha xD

i can imagine him saying that with his cute voice...! hahaha xD


and the last part...!!!! emergeeeeeeeeeeehd...! jxakj;d;;dldld;lksdl

"I think I am starting to get attracted to you"

emergeeeeeeeeeeeeeh...! Chinen Yuriiiii...!!!!!! hahaha xD
momohoshi #8
Chapter 24: hahaha

laptrip in "pretending-to-be-my-imouto-chan" thingy...!!!!! hahaha xD

i can imagine him saying that with his cute voice...! hahaha xD


and the last part...!!!! emergeeeeeeeeeeehd...! jxakj;d;;dldld;lksdl

"I think I am starting to get attracted to you"

emergeeeeeeeeeeeeeh...!
momohoshi #9
Chapter 24: hahaha

laptrip in "pretending-to-be-my-imouto-chan" thingy...!!!!! hahaha xD

i can imagine him saying that with his cute voice...! hahaha xD


and the last part...!!!! emergeeeeeeeeeeehd...! jxakj;d;;dldld;lksdl

"I think I am starting to get attracted to you"

emergeeeeeeeeeeeeeh...!
momohoshi #10
Chapter 23: TT^TT

the news about your dead parents were really heart-breaking...! come to think about that...! you've been separated to them, not knowing what the heck happened to them and now you'll hear this news that they were dead...!!! <///3

super mixed-emotions right now nak...a while ago i was about to cry at the news about your parents but now, i'm about to flail at the end part of this chappy...hahaha
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