What If I Let You In? (Rewrite)

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-Okay guys so im going to rewrite my previous start of this fic, I hope it turns out better and that you like it =3=
Im a new writer so please be nice, constructive critisim is welcomed. The lovely poster was made by the lovely primadonna1608
 
 
 
"Just When I Thought I Could Go,
My Heart Is Lost And You're Pulling Me Back Again,
Wishing On A Falling A Star Wish I Could Be Where You Are,
Somehow You Came And Changed My Everything."- SHINee Replay

Foreword

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Lee Taemin

 

An unpopular  seventeen year old student, who as had to handle a lot more pain and loss than most people his age have to experience in a lifetime. He has had to look after himself since the age of ten and yet as never told anyone, that he has no family. He just needs the right person to see through his cold exterior and help him along the way.

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Choi Minho

 

 The new boy at Taemin's school and was popular as soon as he walked in. Taemin keeps his distance as he realises that Minho is too friendly towards him. All oh his  life Minho has had pretty much had everything handed to him on a plate all his life, so he wants to prove he can live all by himself and take care of himself. He wants to prove that there is so much more to him than just a pretty face and name.

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Kim Jonghyun

 The puppy-saurus who is Minho's best friend since childhood. Jonghyun goes to Taemins school but doesnt really bother with making any friends because he is scared of getting hurt. Jonghyun is also very popular, especially around girls, but most of them dont realise that Jonghyun is gay. Minho and Jongyun don't always get along but they understand eachother perfectely. 

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Kim Kibum (A.K.A Key)

Another new student at Taemins school who joins later in the year. He is very impulsive and wont let anyone hurt his friends.Key has instinctive "Umma" personality which he finds out about when he meets Taemin.

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Lee Jinki (A.K.A Onew)

Chicken lover Onew is really close to Key but hasn't met Minho yet. Onew is a very clumsy yet helpful and kind person. When he meets Taemin he feels like he had seen him somewhere before.

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“Come back here you little !” I ran as fast as I could, feet pounding against the cold hard floor, blood rushing through my head. I could hear them still chasing me up the corridor, past the lockers. I ran past a group of squealing girls all crowded round the new boy. He flashed me a sympathetic glance as I ran by, I scoffed he doesn’t want to get involved with me….

 

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myotterprince #1
Chapter 5: Please continue writing !
This is so good!
LeeEunMi96
#2
Chapter 5: ahh please continue writing!!
reiko_94
#3
Chapter 2: Update soon please!!!!
goojayhee #4
Chapter 1: I'll be waiting for the next chapter....