My fear

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   He has me, but he doesnt have my heart

 

 

 

Why has he kept me?

What does he want from me?

Why won’t he let me go?

 

 

 

 

 

 

You cautiously fast walked to the train station, your breathing was heavy and you were sweating as well. You quickly paid for the ticket with shaking hands, “th-thank you” your voice trembled, you walked slowly with your head lowered so people couldn’t see your face. You sat down waiting for your train to Busan.

Your hand kept shaking of fear but you tried to ignore it, you bit your lip trying to hold in the tears that were welled up in your eyes. You could feel a burning sensation through your throat and a prickly feeling on your milky white skin. You felt scared, what were you going to do once you came to Busan? You had no idea, but you had to get away.

Slowly the train to Busan arrived; you quickly stood up and tightened your grip on your bag’s strap. You dusted off your school skirt and scurried into the train, your heart beat fastened as you got on board. Were you safe now?

You looked around, there was nowhere to sit, and you wiped your forehead and put your hand on your chest. The train doors closed and you felt relived. You held on to a pole as the train accelerated, you could finally relax a bit.

You closed your eyes and took even breaths, a hand slid around your waist making you jolt up and open your eyes instantly. His chest pressed on your back as his left hand lightly your cheek, you froze and your heart beat fastened. “You can’t hide nor can you run away from me, Baek Hyosung,” he smirked, your hands trembled *what does he want from me?*.

 

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Main Characters

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You/ Baek Hyosung (19 yrs. old) May 9th 1993

You are a bright girl, but you are very fragile. You smile to keep in all the pain, but no one knows how you feel. You like singing and dancing but have stopped dancing one year ago, you are pretty and your eyes always show innocence. You don’t know where your parents are, you don’t know where your brother is. You don’t know why you’re with him, Jihoon your fear. 

 

 

 

 

 

Pyo Jihoon/ P.O (20 yrs. old) January 4th 1992

Mysterious, you don’t really know anything about him, he doesn’t speak much but sometimes he does.He likes simple things. He has kidnapped you away from your family and your now with him in Seoul, why aren’t you parents looking for you? 

 

Zico/Jiho (19 years old) june 1st 1993 

your friend, no Scratch that he is your best friend, he doesn't know about your life much but loves you dearly. He is funny and lovely  to be with, good looking and tall. your talented smoking best friend who is always there for you when you need him so overall he is a really good guy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Everyone has fears even you do, its called your fear, my fear....

 

 

 

 

Anneyong this is kkberry (kkcherryme) with another fanfiction, i am doing a mystery type fic.

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EnaLovely #1
Chapter 7: noooooo why did you let her dieee nooooooooooooooo
nice story... but... but!!!! she didn't even discuss anything with JH... they didn't even share a real kiss... oh boy, such a sad ending...
anyways, nice story!!
Karmablogger
#2
Congratulations on winning third place!
dongwooandme
#3
Chapter 7: but what happen to Jihoon?????? :o this is so sad. hyosung died ㅠㅠ
Hyo_young
#4
Chapter 7: Hyosung died ;____;
Sad ending ...,,,what about Jihoon ? :(
But Nice story author ,,,
Hyo_young
#5
Chapter 7: Hyosung died ;____;
Sad ending ...,,,what about Jihoon ? :(
But Nice story author ,,,
kimeunsoo
#6
Chapter 7: Oh my god why? TT_____TT
Why should Hyosung dies in the end? She doesn't even manage to apologize to Jihoon ;o; And Jihoon hasn't confess to her yet. Omg why why ;w;
And haish, Hyosung's fam was so harsh. Bleh, her 'oppa' too :3
But still... why why? T^T
ilikebagel
#7
Chapter 7: ahhhhh so Jihoo is actually her saviour?? so he just acting cold?? this is sooo sad but a good one...good job, author-nim
kpoplover35 #8
Chapter 7: omg it's so sad but sooooooo amazing it just so heart felt I luv it!!!!!
GummyBear24 #9
Chapter 7: Why? :'(
But still I maybe didn't read carefully, but was Jihoon her adopted brother?
GummyBear24 #10
Chapter 6: I love it
Hope you update soon, even thought I don't want to end, I still want to know how it will end :))