Last Breath

Description

Have you ever had your heart ripped out by your own lover? Embarrassed in front of the entire grade? That pain that just blooms across your chest, it’s unmistakable. When I see them together, whether it is kissing, or just simply hugging, it tortures me. Mentally and physically. The only question that begs to be answered in my head…is she really all that good? I could have been in her place if he had chosen me instead. When I breathe my last breath…I would still see them together. I’m giving up. Life’s all a lie. It has turned into this. Living is a constant battle

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"it was all a lie."

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ft. Infinite's visual, Kim Myungsoo (L)

T-ARA's original maknae, Park Jiyeon

& last but not least,

Miss A's main vocalist maknae, Bae Suzy

 

 

Foreword

I'm writing this short story for a writing contest: Never Stop Dreaming. I'm using prompt #27 & #45:

"Living is a constant battle." 

"They say before you die, your whole life flashes before your eyes."

I'm afraid this will be a poorly written story, so please give me constructive critisim to help me out and all~! (: And, this will be my first "Myungyeon" and "Myungzy" fanfiction, so do give me some support. (: Love you all. (: 

Also, a big thank you to YatLuvG at R A M Y U N S O U P | Graphic Request Shop for making my poster! (: 

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jhanna #1
Chapter 11: jiyeon<333333333333333333333333 myungzy d: d:
MYUNGYEON<3333333333333333
NO ME PARECIO INJUSTO QUE MI JIYEON MURIERA :c Y QUE MYUNGSOO SEA FELIZ
MaaarieBiscuit #2
Chapter 10: Why's Suzy a meanie here? Oh. But it's okay at least in the end it's still MYUNGZY. :)
kayisthebomb
#3
Chapter 11: awh! that was so sad T.T
i kinda thought what the next chapter could be like after she commit suicide, myungsoo and the whole school'd reaction
Jiyeonn
#5
Chapter 11: This made me so sad! Suzy was such a jerk in this story and Myungsoo was an idiot. I hope they're feeling horrible that Jiyeon is now dead.
jiyeonyesung #6
Chapter 10: please update one chapter too about myungsoo:)
aisharahmi
#7
Chapter 11: is not fair , jiyeon death and myungsoo had a happy life with suzy :"(
Xian_love
#8
Chapter 10: Ugh, what Suzy said sounded very sl*tish, and if that was all Myungsoo was looking for, then he isn't a man. Aww Jiyeon killed herself...although I saw it coming...It was a great story though:D
If this wasn't for a contest, would you have paired her with another guy to rip, crush, and stomp on Myungsoo's terrible heart?>:3
Hehe just kidding, you did amazing with this story though!No lie!<3