A New Legend

Description

This is the first story that I've written since i was a little kid. No H was intended in the beginning. But since this story isn't quite finished, I edited the story a lil' bit and is still thinking whether to put H or not (lol) Well, for now.. theres none so far :)

Yeah, I know what you guys are thinking.. 'Another' Criis! But this time, It's me! I want to deny that.. but yeah, I'll just be honest and tell the truth. The Criis in the story is me! What can you say? I was a little girl at that time >.< who had lots of imaginations and stories in her head lol. I still have lots of stories in my head now x.x wonder how I can keep all those in my head. Lawl, I'll just stop here for now. Enjoy! ^^

Sorry about the grammars.. I need to fix that but I'll do it later.

 

Characters

Criis - ( me as the story teller.)

Dru - The main female character in the story.

           Brave

           Strong

           Tomboy

           Looks like a boy because of her attitude and her short hair.

           Always helps out people in need of help at the town/market.

           Very active.

           12 years old.

 

Rick - Dru's childhood friend.

            Loves to blacksmith because of his father.

             Weak and hates sports.

            A year younger than Dru.

 

Ummar - Dru's ex-boyfriend.

                 Playboy.

                 Hates to be lonely.

                 Is at the same age as Dru.

                 

Starrie - Dru's Aunt & guardian.

                Hates wars.

                Kind and loving.

                30+ years old.

 

Shuitian - Town cheif of a town called Elderine.

                   In charge of the safety of the town and citizens.

                   Deals with problems outside towns too.

                   40+ years old.

 

Adrian - Town cheif of Uruga.

                Years old. (Almost 30 i think.)

               

Cyburn - A master trainer and age is around 40-50 years old.

                Helps Adrian from time to time.

 

Christopher - A young guard age around years old.

                         Completely trusted by Shuitian.

Foreword

Prologue

 

Long long ago...
Well, Kinda. The story that i'll be telling is a legend that everyone.Well, almost everyone,knows. Except those in Earth. All they think about this story is that it's just a fantasy story. A story full of epic,fun and excitement,all to their entertainment.. I really hate how-
"Criis,are you coming to the ceremony later?"one of my friend asked as she passed with her friends.

Yeah, I will." I replied.

"Okay,thats good. I'll see you later then." my friend said.

"Yeah, see you." She ran back to her other friends that shes hanging out with,then turned around and waved. I waved back at her.

 

Oookay.. now back to the story. There are two worlds, something like dimensions. Two totally different dimensions. One, as we all already know, is Earth and the other, Isya.

Long ago, Isya is a world that has many places, just like Earth but with a different atmosphere. Most of the places in Isya is safe. Lots of green trees, waterfalls, fresh air.. There were only a few places that were dangerous at that time and only very strong and high ranked people had access to go there. Isya is a world full of peace, or so.. it "was".

 

Yes.

Isya "was" a world full of peace. Until one day, a guy or should i say, a god called "Legel" who was supposed to be dead, but isn't. He secretly recruited monsters who was defeated and bullied by people that is stronger than them. Monsters who wants the human and elve race destroyed. Nobody knew this "guy" was Legel, the god who tried to destroy every living thing in Isya, but failed. Legel was living with a different name in human form. His name at that time was...

"Erremys".

 

When Legel had recruited enough monsters, he went to find the gods which he created with his own power long ago and asked them to join him. They agreed. The next day, Legel started waging war, killing every human and elves they see from one place to another.



In a faraway land, a man and his wife is spending their time with their beautiful 3 months old daughter.

 

A few days has passed. Rumours about the war and the fact that Legel is in it is now spreading everywhere in Isya. Letters to recruit skilled and brave men and women were being sent everywhere in Isya to fight in the war, save Isya, and kill Legel once and for all!

 

Many people came for the war, including the 3 months old girl's parents. Her mother is still weeping to the fact that she had to leave her daughter to her sister's care. Theres nothing that her mother could do. She wants to be with her daughter but at the same time, she wants to help her husband in the war. She didn't like choosing, but had to in the end. The girl's father is holding her mother in his arms, trying to calm her mother down. The girl's father kept on saying "Everythings going to be okay. We will see her again." Tears coming down from his face.The little girl's father was also crying..

The war lasted for days, months, years...


After 4 years, the war has finally ended.Thousands of people were killed. Both elves and humans. Though not all of the monsters that was in the war aren't dead, but the most important person that they needed to kill,the person who started this war, is dead.

Yes, Legel is dead. As Legel took his last breath, a dark light came out of Legel's body and flew away.

 

The little girl, now 4 years old, waited for her parents all day long but still, her parents have not came back. There were no sight of them. Not even their bodies,it was as if they have never existed at all.

Two months has passed, still no sight of them. The officers in charge of the search had no choice but to report them "dead". A messenger was sent to deliver the news to the girl's aunt of her parent's existence.



When the messenger finally reached the house, the messenger knocked the door. Her aunty opened the door and saw the messenger soaking wet. It was raining heavily. She let the messenger in and prepared hot water for the him. The messenger took a sip and told the little girl's aunty the news. Her aunty gasped and cried as quietly as she could. The little girl was sleeping upstairs.. she didn't want to wake her up.

The little girl came down the stairs wondering who knocked the door a few minutes ago. She asked her aunty as she walked down the stairs,

"Is mama and papa back?"There was no reply.

She walked to her aunt and looked at her.

'Shes crying' she thought and then asked "whats wrong?". Still no reply.

The little girl turn her head to look at the messenger. "Whats going on?" the girl asked.

The messenger looked away and took another sip. "Uh..., I better get going. Thank you for the drink." He put down the cup, took his bag and stood up.

The messenger was about to walk out of the house, but the girl ran after him and pulled his hand.The messenger turned his head to look at the little girl.

"Wait! Tell me what happened to my mama and papa!" the girl shouted.Then the girl started crying.Her aunty pulled her away and hugged her then said "Shh, they're still on their way home." The girl's aunty signalled the messenger to get out with her head.



The messenger walked to the door and then opened it. It was still raining heavily. He walked out and closed the door. "What a bad day..." the messenger said.

He sighed and then walked away.

 

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Plmokn #1
Update soon