Chapter 1: When his sleeping dragon roars to life


Oh gawd this is cuteeee

Chapter 1: waaaaah so cute; -;

Chapter 1: I wonder until when are they gonna keep up the act? I'm curious how are they gonna react when they both discover they aren't fooling anyone but themselves. That would've been awkward and embarrassing but I want it hot of course. Loved this!

Chapter 1: When you mentioned fruit I did not expect this.......
LOVE the way you write, by the way....

Chapter 1: wow this is just so awesome Hahahahhaha xD

Chapter 1: Sweet like the grapefruit and completely adorkable!!

Chapter 1: OMFG U have no clue how much I'm crying due to this piece of perfection. "His sleeping dragon roar to life" asdfjklgh so many feels. Kris and tao are like the cutest couple ever okay. I jus wanna hug them ><

Chapter 1: I FOUND QUALITY PROSE! I FOUND QUALITY PROSE! *sobs in happiness and reminder of prose essay I'm shirking for AP Literature*

That aside, this is the first time I'm actually commenting on an Exo fic. Probably because I only lurk around and write Girls' Generation stories...

I now understand that the art of eating grapefruit is quite sensual. I suppose that you can make anything sensual really XD

No but really, the flow, the tone, the words as;dlfkjadf So good...

I got really excited during the eighth paragraph when the words were rhyming lol XD Day way, day way, what a nice rhythmic pattern...

Small grammar error? I think you're missing the word "is" when you're talking about Tao's balance so it would be "how impeccable his balance is." Idk, don't hurt me *dives into hole*

So yeah. This is really good. I'm glad to have stumbled upon this lovely Taoris story ^_^

Chapter 1: ; A ; this is y in it own way okay.
i just cannot.
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Chapter 1: kris & tao both stupid with each other <3 AHAHAHA