A Bridge called Loneliness

Description

 

minho was alone until he met a boy on a bridge at night. they both had dangerous intentions but they both ended up making a desicion that changed their life.

they chose the fall the wrong way.

. . . . 

"why are you crying?"

"because im not alone"

"you're not"

Foreword

this is just a oneshot i did when i was bored :)

isnt boredem great...

but do tell me if it is any good ??

<3

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devilishangel_15 #1
Chapter 1: Holy ! I dont know why i cried,....but i did. It was so beautiful :') I LOVED IT! :)
arinaabrar #2
Chapter 1: :) amazing
SohAnna #3
Chapter 1: Shucks!!! The story is so wonderful!!K
TaeminPanda #4
Chapter 1: omo so good, please write more like this! you should get bored more often, this was so beautiful, i got all teared up! very good!
RenskeMichelle #5
Chapter 1: It was so wonderful! I know that 'happy' kind of feeling so well, you feel bad for being happy you're almost dead but at the same time you can't help it. Loved this (:
alexshineeexo #6
Chapter 1: a sad and very realistic story...LOVE IT!!!
SHEreads #7
As a survivor of my own suicide attempt when I was a teenager, I can honestly say this is a good short story. I remember my own hesitancy and all the 'head-traffic' at that moment. I liked that it's vague on the nitty gritty details that brings the two characters to the bridge. I feel that lets diverse people identify with them easier. What was important was the tone of the story, which was hopeful and optimistic. Keep writing!
Iskamika #8
Chapter 1: I really like it, how they are saving each other <3
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