Loyalty

Description

prequel to Cutting Strings. A Romeo and Juliet/ Fairytale-ish story about two star-crossed lovers.

Foreword

He was standing in front of a beautiful girl and they were alone in the middle of a garden with the light of the moon making the dew from the leaves spark as if there were diamonds scattered everywhere. The cool night breeze blew her hair and dress, yet she remained beautiful and he felt his throat constrict. His hands unconsciously raised and touched her cheeks and he leaned down and guided his lips towards her own. And as their lips touched, it was like magic—they felt an electric shock all over their bodies that they still felt tingly even if their lips were already separated.

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emevas21 #1 Dec 4, 2014 22:00:34

Aaaaw..good good job author!

gail1528 #2 Mar 9, 2014 03:47:00

Chapter 1: Peaches! This story is fudging good! My feelings for this tragic love story is overflowing right now.

CassieJYJlhyn #3 Mar 4, 2014 02:19:49

Chapter 1: Whoaaaa.. What a tragic love story very nice ^^

Willidingding #4 Feb 5, 2014 01:33:27

i like it!!!

It #5 Aug 2, 2013 16:39:57

i love it!

Pasta- #6 Nov 19, 2011 03:09:40

I love this! I so love this! :) It was tragic, but everything was explained well. I could feel the nerves on my brain functioning well upon knowing what really happened. It so good that I stumbled upon this fic. This is actually worth the read even if the ending was tragic like that.

girlinpinksneakers #7 Sep 6, 2011 03:11:38

i enjoyed reading this...Jiyong and Sandara's love story is really a tragic~ OH MY GAAAAWD!

girlinpinksneakers #8 Sep 6, 2011 01:30:06

im done reading cutting strings...it's just now, that i notice this is the prequel.. *sigh*

neekha #9 Aug 27, 2011 21:26:58

omonaa!! i read cutting strings already and i just saw this prequel!! this is so saaaad! 
 
you're really making me sad in cutting strings and here, Loyalty! TT.TT 
i got teary eyed at the part where Jiyong's father asked her to kill Dara and also the part where they said they never loved each other.. x(

angelfairy #10 Aug 12, 2011 14:52:15

I agree.. this was really your forte. sooo tragic and very heartbreaking OS. 
 
it's so sad that they haven't given a chance to live life life freely. :( Yes, for once they've experience to live away from their own parents but still they aren't totally free, theyre hiding. HAyz! 
 
so sad that they're the one who'd suffered fr. what their parents had done, ARGH!! if only they could change everything, if only fate wasn't cruel.. the 2 together with their daughter would've been very happy & satisfied living their life now! T.T 
 
but somehow their story was very admirable. no matter what he had done, in the end he chose to be with her eventhough it's in the afterlife...T_T *sniff*