Chapter 1: I love you, I really do. This story warmed my heart. I'm especially proud of how little time you had to write this and it still turned this good. I love Daesung's inner thoughts about dying, the subjectivity of how he feels. I love the time travel aspect and his warning to himself. I, of course, loved Yuri, the mysterious voice of reason in a seemingly unending vortex of Daesung's crazed thoughts. You are an awesome writer, and you write better at four in the morning than I can ever, save a few awkward sentences. I hope we both make it to the second round.
I love you.
/your/ number one fan.
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