The World that you Existed in

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Kibum thought the friendship between them was over.

He thought his hidden feelings had ruined everything.

Was he wrong.. or right...?

Foreword

._. I actualy just wrote this without thinking about the characters. kinda wrote what I feel about something and made it jongkey >u>;; 

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laziestasitgets #1
Chapter 2: NO! WHO TOLD YOU THIS IS OKAY! I AM IN TEARS! MY GOD.
NYUTAENGS #2
Chapter 2: daebak. that's all i could say. :)
Bettina #3
Chapter 1: Woah.... That was deep :O DAEBAK!! xD The story was done quite well!! Although it'll be better if it was a little bit longer and had a little more detail. It was a little bit confusing ^^;; It's really good, but just a little more detail, like maybe, when the girl comes?? Like a flashback or something?? Or how they got separated?? Something like that. Also the ending was quite abrupt. Maybe you could've added a hospital scene and ended the story there?? But, other than that, I don't see anything wrong with it :D I hope I helped xD
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