Chapter 1: it's still good ! ^^ . don't worry bout it !

Chapter 1: :D i love your stories! this is another awesome one! ^^ it's good to read some brotherly love once in a while~ <3

Chapter 1: I'm not the only one who thought he was probably hurt by that comment? I'm sure it was supposed to be a joke, but well--

Anyways, this was well written and I enjoyed quite a lot! It was sweet, how Jinyoung comforted him about his insecurity. I was as skeptic as all of them when Sandeul said he "wasn't hungry". Is such a thing even possible? I'm convinced his stomach is like a black hole.

I actually laughed out loud over how everyone else was leaning against the door "not eavesdropping". Chanshik's excuse was classic.

When Jinyoung said he was going to be Sandeul's number one fan was for sure my favorite part. Having someone you admire and look up to saying they want to be your fan, and number one at that? Very precious, I see Sandeul being overbearingly happy over something like that.

Overall, I felt myself practically smiling through this whole thing, you really nailed everyone's personalities and quirks well (which I do not say often). I was genuinely worried when Sandeul wouldn't come out of his room, Jinyoung should have just gone in first to save them all the trouble.

This is sort of long, I apologize. I hope you keep writing Jindeul, you're a good writer. //adds to favorites once again//