Change of Identity

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I watched happily as my friend smiles and wipes the sauce off her boyfriend's face.

I watched angrily as that sickening girl smiles and wipes the sauce off my love's face.

I smile as I watched my friend kiss her boyfriend.

I frown and ball up my fists as I watched that sickening girl kiss my love.

I'm happy for my best friend. She's an angel, she deserves all these.

No. This is all so wrong. It should be me there, next to him, smiling, kissing, hugging and being with him! I am supposed to be his girlfriend, not this brat here. Why does she deserves all these while I'm here, watching them with a furious heart?

I am going to end this. Once and for all. I am going to be my best friend, to whatever extent I'll need to go.

Foreword

"W-what do you w-want?"

"I want your face."

"M-my face? W-what for?"

"Don't destroy that face, idiot. Let me explain. First things first, do you know how much I love Kris?! Do you know how much I want him?! Do you know that you led me on when I asked if you two would be together and you said no? Had you have any idea how much pain I had to go through when I saw you and Kris together the next day?! Kris wouldn't love another girl! Not unless I am you! So I am going to take your face and put it on me. I will have Kris. And you, you will be me. You will know how I felt whenever I see Kris being all loving with you. Feel my pain, Hani. Feel. My. Pain."

"You.."

Hello! ^^ It's Gemslover here! I am going to present a short fic/story for the contest named 'Enchanted [AFF writing contest!]'.

I chose the theme number #4; Action. Hopefully, you guys will enjoy this short fic by me. I don't know if this plot had already appeared before but I'll just give it a shot(:

Just a warning before you start getting into the story, this fic contains disturbing scenes such as overly insane girl and self-surgery scene.

Continue if you think you'll be able to go to sleep after reading my chapters. Which isn't that scary after all. Since I'm still a beginner O:

Also, please support me if you think I did well in potraying the scenes.☺

Just another thing to add, the theme songs for this fic is 'Guilty by Kara's Seungyeon' for the first few chapters and 'Wanna Do by Kara's Jiyoung.' for the last chapter.. Listen to it to get into the mood.(:

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Purple-Peng ^{1301 streak} #1 Apr 17, 2017 02:11:36

Chapter 5: I feel bad for Hani who suffered from "her friend" but I do wonder if she will at least except Kris but she might not except the child he had with her friend. At least Kris finally knows the truth about the Hani he married and loved. Although I hated the OC/reader (who is me if I put my name in that space) I like that her dying got her to admit the truth to Kris. Did she at least regret what she did to Hani?
I wonder if that fact is true about surgery is true, I always imagined that if someone had surgery would their child look like their new face or their old face. Your story reminded me of a Jdrama called "Face Maker" where one of the themes involve surgery (for many different reasons depending on the character in that story) and how their old face could be given to anyone which will be troublesome or make them question their desire for a new face.

Purple-Peng ^{1301 streak} #2 Apr 17, 2017 01:57:27

Chapter 2: The way she handled her parents kind of reminded me of one episode of Tales from the Crypt where a restaurant serves human flesh as steak. It is a bit disturbing how she acts, wonder if there is a reason for her behavior.

PiKai_chu #3 Mar 27, 2015 01:37:57

Chapter 5: Ohhhh wow o_O Although it's just short, it is really3 good.. uhuhuhujjj.. It's a little bit scary though when she did the surgery.. Uhhhhh..