Body Shop

Description

In the lower city of South Korea, the spurned and the poor come from miles around to try to make a new life while the rich live in ignorance, except for one. A moderately well-known star by the name of Kim Myungsoo. Myungsoo lives a secret life: the life of a racer who never shows his face, and brings changes to the way of life in the lower and upper city.

Foreword

The adrenaline. The rev of the engine. The smoke of skidding tires. This is what I live for. That, and the money. Here in the lower city, things are hard, and not just life, but living. You've heard of a "hard knock life"? Well, this is where the phrase was born. Not orphans, although most of us are orphans. The way of life here is simple. Race. Win. Live. For if not, you die.But if you are good, then The Black Dragons will find you. The rich and famous have no idea what goes down on the back roads. They just know not to come here. That is why I come here. Performing for adoring fans is alright. But this is the rush I can't get enough of. 

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jongiefangirl4 #1
Chapter 2: This fic has two basic mistakes that will set up for it's inevitable failure:

1. HOW CAN YOU MISSPELL WOOHYUN'S NAME!?!?! :O

2. I see spelling errors :P


~~ Other than that the plot is awful, your chapters are to short, I almost fell asleep after vomiting while reading your first chapter... Hmmmmmm where else did you go wrong..

I sense it's not too shabby overall Erlexx.... I'd give it a 7 out of 10 for effort :P

Just that constructive criticism you asked for :P tehehe

But I do love the Myungie feels... even though there weren't any feels involved O_o you should add some feels next time XD

Keep updated. I'm a subscriber!!!
EvilMaknae187
#2
Chapter 1: Hajong?? Hmmmm, I sense you steals mah name....... ^_^ It'll just be proof of mah awesome fic.....


^_^ ^_^ ^_^

You need a drumroll before Myungie starts racing....XD
xibeastbaby #3
OMG!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW IF HE WINS THE RACE!! :) hurry and finish it! all of it! tehe
DrumlineSpaz #4
Chapter 1: comments are appreciated, please make it constructive criticism, no flames

comments are fuel
DrumlineSpaz #5
Chapter 1: comments are appreciated, please make it constructive criticism, no flames

comments are fuel