My Older Brother A.K.A My Love Rival

Description

When you become a teenager you grow feeling that you haven't had when you were a kid. And some people grow those feelings faster and earlier than others.

For example...


Kim Myungsoo and Cha Yumi.

Myungsoo and Yumi are both in high school now. Myungsoo starts seeing the light in Yumi now. But Yumi still sees Myungsoo as..........Well....Myungsoo....

As Myungsoo grows feelings for Yumi there is also another person who has a change in feelings... 

Kim Sunggyu, Kim Myungsoo's older brother by two years. Before all this happened a little while back....Sunggyu had his own past/story. In the year of 2001 Sunggyu and Myungsoo's parents went on a trip to N.Y.C. to visit a relative that lived there. That day just conceitedly had to be 9/11. The day they left, it was Myungsoo and Sunggyu's last day that they saw them. Sunggyu was harshly effected, but Myungsoo being at a young age didn't know what was going on he was still himself. But Sunggyu really never became his normal self...Until he met Sunhwa Hahn. She was everything to him. She made him smile and brought him back out of his state of depression. He loved her dearly and she loved him dearly back...

But that's what Sunggyu thought..Until he saw her cheating on him,she was two-faced.. Sunggyu became completely heart broken, and fell back into his state of depression. 

Until he, himself started to notice the light in Yumi. How he made her smile just like how Sunhwa used to. 

He had feelings....for Yumi.

But what he didn't know....Was that his own little brother had the same feelings.

Unknowingly... Myungsoo's love rival becomes....His older brother??

 

 

 

 

 

CHARACTERS

 

 

 

 

Cha Yumi

{You... Imagine your face the whole story :) }

 

• Sweet and caring

• Obsessed with B1A4 Baro

• Bestie's with Myungsoo since birth

 

 

 

Kim Myungsoo

• From a rich family

• Best friends with Yumi since birth

• Has a crush on Yumi since high school

• Cold... Just cold..

 

Kim SungGyu

 

• Sweet but has a big hole in his heart

• Can be strict at times

• Funny

• Starting to have feelings for Yumi

 

                          ~The Kim Brother~

 

                     

 

  Sohn Gaeul

 

• Shy and quiet

• Loud and crazy when it comes to B1A4

• In love with JinYoung in B1A4

• Not sure with love

 

Nam WooHyun

 

 

• G-R-E-A-S-Y

• Out going when it comes to girls

• Friend with Myungsoo and Yumi

 

 

Foreword

HI b1a4lova here :) My bestie and I decided to make another story hehhe :) I hope you guys like it, subscribe and comment~~ <3 

 

Hello~ WHAAA this is my 2nd fanfic^^...Well not exactly MINE but...you get what im saying...TT^TT... Hope you guys enjoy and like my bestie, b1a4lova... like, comment, subscribe, bookmark, and vote up (if u have that many karma points XD [I praise you if you have over 100 karma points XD <3]  Friend me so that we can be friends :)) and check out OUR other fanfic SEVERLY SORRY!!

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Smile-cheeks
#1
Chapter 8: Ohohoho, not a happy, cheerful chapter as I see~
Anyway, poor boys, they are quite in hard situations...
But there's always rainbow after the rain, right? :) So, let's wait patiently!
Welcome back~! :)
Stay healthy, be happy and eat a lot! ^^
FIGHTING~! <3
btsislife #2
are you guys never going to update? :( ㅠ-ㅠ i really liked the story so far.. but there hasnt been an update since like 2013 and its already 2015..
Smile-cheeks
#3
Chapter 7: Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha omg ;d It's funnnnnny xd
She's really lucky that she found her phone ;d Everytime when I lost my phone, I never found it again T.T
Anyway that 'date' with Sunggyu was cuteee <3 Probably she will end up with Myungsoo, but still I'm Sunggyu's team :D
Thanks for that chapter :p Don't forget to update soon again, fighting <3
jasumine
#4
Chapter 7: I want her to be with Sunggyu also D:
saveme
#5
Chapter 7: I want sunggyu to be with yumi...
It seems so obvious that everyone wants her to be with myungsoo...
xchessthebest
#6
Chapter 7: So obvious that Gaeul likes Woohyun, lol.
Ugh, I will cry if Yumi doesn't end up with Myungsoo in the end. ;~;
xchessthebest
#7
Chapter 6: Aw, I really want Yumi with Myungsoo though. :(
xchessthebest
#8
Chapter 5: Omg, now the love begins!
I really want her to end up with Myungsoo though..
xchessthebest
#9
Chapter 3: Omg, Myungsoo with the jook. LOL
He's so adorable. ^_^