Poem Case No. 1

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Symptoms with Bree

 

Assuming that it was headache,

But not a headache after all.

Assuming that it was stomach ache,

But neither it was.

It was an awe-inspiring moment,

When he was just two inch away from me.

So breath taking,

Trembling,

Shaking,

And wavering I was on that time.

 

The air was suffocating,

My heart was stucked,

I could rancorously breath.

The atmosphere was filled with glee,

A bizarre moment when I saw Bree.

Few sign of nervous breakdown,

Flopping heart that is melting down.

 

In his stares,

I feel heaven.

With the flows of music,

Like of Beethoven.

It was a dream,

A fairytale,

Like of Cinderella,

Singing in acapella.

This heart sings and dances,

Everytime I see you and with

thoughts of chances.

 

You are amazing,

But don't think that I am chasing.

You are funny,

And you make me feel like it's

always sunny.

Silly,

Gentle,

Smart,

That is what you are.

Before I will go further,

I and my frends were talking 

together.

Silent and giggled inside a room,

Recommended me to asylum.

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yvzutea
#1
Chapter 7: its just beautiful ;u;
just a thing
lol this is so funny omfg
forgive me before
i just cant stop thinking of .......... rated things here
"fist crumples these sheets
excitingly moves in one space"
omgomgomg what am i thinking omg
but its totally fine bahahhahhaha
yvzutea
#2
requested c:c:
your writing is totally my style
cx
mikyulovee
#3
Chapter 6: You are AMAZING!!
Kekeke im going to write my first fic, and use your poem!
thank you so much!!~ <3
mikyulovee
#4
submitted one!!~
i hope you accept it!