Love At First Sight

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Okay this is my first fanfic ever so costructive critism is welcome :) and if you want me to continue after this chapter please tell me? 

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KAZEYAMaru #1
Chapter 2: lol just want the suite OH GOD !! lol
ZeacoIsMine
#2
Chapter 2: Himchan, take a note.. Whenever yongguk get mad at you, just an ice lolly and he'll shut up xD

update soon :3
rohi_z
#3
Chapter 1: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH himchan so... CHEEEZAAII!!
well.. his thoughts!.. that is
OMMGGG!! YESS!! u subscribed to ma story n when 1 does so, i MUST in repay, chek their stories out as WELL!
n i gots to SAY!.. i feel like i HAAAAAVEE to read thee next chap!!! so apparently... it's GUUD!!
royalnini
#4
Chapter 2: awww. i like this :)
kirby_panda
#5
Chapter 2: yay!~ you finallllyyyy updated!~ ^3^
pychify #6
Chapter 2: Muhahahhaahhahahaha can't they just do it in the couch... lolhahaha I'm sorry!
kirby_panda
#7
Chapter 1: more!!! please!~ :)
maybe they'll have some fun?... idk im tired... and shamelessly looking around for .. XD