Chapter 1: Omg your writing is A++ you are A++ is general. It's so poetic and lovely. Usually I'm not really a fan of poetry and such but this is awesommeee. You just use all the right words and it's like, ow my heart. I'm bad at comments, but I really loved this :D
Chapter 1: So poetic. I think this is the first poem I've read in a long time. I just finished reading the Iliad for a class, but it doesn't feel much like a poem. Plus this is simple (not long drawn) and easy to understand, so I like it.
Chapter 1: I really really like the style! It's extremely poetic, and I think it suits you and the story... it flows really well and omg its so well thought out and fjsakdflsa CHARACTERIZATION. fjasld;f super awesome haha.
also the endinggggg. the fingers interlocking and breaths mingling OMG OKAY IT SOUNDS A LITTLE... hehehehe... i like it
its a story of fulfillment? (haha mentally of course... but physically??? heheheheheheheheheh maybeee or maybe my minds just in the gutter)
but yessssssss i liked this. MAKE MOREEEEEE :D
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