Chapter 2: Kyusung are so precious...and the interactions with Minnie and Wookie are hilarious. I really did enjoy this story !!!

Chapter 2: I love this so much! <333

Chapter 1: I think this is one of my favorites, no joke! I loved this, especially the inquiry of minwook because it was hilarious how serious Yesung took it. Ad love the fact that Kyuhyun can decipher Yesung's sighs, that's just the weirdest, most adorable thing ever XD. And Sungmin does like someone..?? Interesting ... Anyways, great story!

Chapter 1: I'm probably reading the stories in the wrong order but oh well......LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! I thought it was Kyuhyun Sungmin was in love with but i really hope its Kangin (sorry Leeteuk) cause they look so cute together!!!

Chapter 2: can i request it to be Kangin the one ming is in love with and have it be like kyusyung? actually a mutual feeling as they can't seem to make the other see it? and maybe have heechul be kangin's confident had have him get kangmin together? or maybe even have yesung andf heechul find out that kangmin feels for each other i really need more kangmin fics out there D:
as for why i think it's kangmin it's mostly because of the part ming says he had went away and other than having his feelings subside they just got strong and the whole awkwardness that everybody relates to kangmin can i request it? *kitten eyes*

Chapter 2: ohohoho! i loved your Kyusung (Of course! who doesn't love Kyusung, right? :D). loved the Kyusung fluffiness so much (especially when Yesungie turns Kyu into jelly >\\\<)

but what really got me here was Minnie's angst (boy that dude can angst hard! even harder than Yesung). I kind of feel that the mystery man that Minnie was in love with was Kangin (or i wish, really really REALLY hard XD). i was kinda clapping like a retarded seal while thinking that there was a ninja!KangMin in here. hahaha! :)

pleeease let there be a sequel. >:)<

Oh. critique?
I don't write stories but i've read a lot of yours already. i can say that your Kyusung is very unique. it makes it easier to tell it apart from other Kyusung writers (and i like that very much). also, i love that you aren't focusing on the fluff but also on their insecurities and internal struggles as well (the it's not always rainbows and butterflies kind of thing).
the earlier part was not the critique part. hahaha! this one is.
--> there are still some misspelled words here and there but they're not really noticable, i'm just pretty OC. XD

actually i'm not really good at giving critique. but i'm pretty sure that you are one of my fave fic writers. the kind that when i see your name as an author i'm gonna go "ah, this is gonna be a good one" :) so, yeah.. that's pretty much it dear. :) keep writing, i love your stuff. :)

Chapter 2: Okay, FINALLY I'm gonna give a proper comment for this. Whew.

Dawwwwwww Yeye's so adorable, jumping to conclusions like that. And Kyu is equally adorable, even tho he doesn't seem that way. Kekeke "helping" Yesung find out the truth.

:( Poor Minnie tho. Unrequited love is honestly nothing to joke around about, altho MUST YOU TEASE US SO? The clues you give are so vague that I honestly can't guess for the life of me, and yet they contain just enough substance to make me doubt. >.<

Kyusung interaction, once again priceless. I swear, you write the best fluff. It's just so......fluffy!!! I kind of like how they're more intimate, and maybe a bit more, comfortable(?), with their relationship, or rather the "definition" of their relationship. It's a nice difference from the continuum. After all, more intimacy means more fangirling for me! ;)

And, OMGGGG THAT GIF WHERE HE, errrr, ummmm, has the red hair? xD WHERE IS THAT FROM??? O_O

...ahem. Anyways, keep 'em coming! I will honestly hunt you and your laptop down if you don't share your beautiful Kyusung stories with us!!

Chapter 2: I'm not shure I like posessive!Kyu. In being posessive, he comes off as qustioning if Yesung loves him, or will stay with him. But Yesung does talk about felling that way so I don't know. I love this story, and the YeMin moment was adorable. I just can't figure out who Min likes. Hopeing for a sequel. :)

Oh wow.. I don't see why you think it's not what I'd expect. It has all the flavors that I love!! Now the YeMin moment was.. Gosh, it was soo touching. I almost reached out to Sungmin for all that pain he's feeling. Unrequited love, could be painful as hell but sticking with 'not knowing' is more painful and pitiful. I applaud Minnie for opening up though. Sooner or later he won't be able to hold it in. But, are you sure Ye was right in making Kyu stay with Sungmin? Hmm.. Guess Kyu's brand of friendship is sort of entertaining :D

Gaah, now I can't help but want a sequel!! I'm pretty sure it's Kang-bear but who knows. As for Wookie, he has a girlfriend? I would have thought it's the other way around with MinWook.

As for your writing, it's great as always but dear I just have to say that the first part of the story flowed smoothly and, as far as I can remember, no mistakes. Going down, missing words, misused words, that sort that can make reading a bit glitchy. There. I've said the crit part ^^ But overall, a great fic.

Oh, I have been meaning to ask, Why is Kyu possessive? His nature? Sure. but possessiveness stemmed on something. or maybe not. oh well.. I love a possessive Kyu anyways.

Can you please advance their stage to something that includes 'tongue'? I mean, come on, lip biting? I want tongue and a bit of french please.. May I request that for the next fic? *chuckles* You can berate me on twitter *lol*

♥ you dear. *huggles*