Mosquito and the Boy with the Insect Repellent

Description

Mosquitos. Insect repellents. Against each other, yet probably won't exist without each other.


Hebe Tien, the mosquito.

no, she's not a mosquito. She's human, like any one of us. Yet, people nickname her so.

 

Arron Wu, the boy with insect repellents.

Don't ask me why. But this boy...brings these things with him. Perhaps it's a new version of pepper spray.

Foreword

"Daddy, please tell me a story," Zoe tried to ask as politely as she could.

Arron carried her to the bookshelf so she could pick a book herself.

Zoe struggled out of Arron's grasp and ran back to her bed. She slipped into the covers allowing Arron to sit next to her.


"I want to hear the story of the Mosquito and the Boy again."

Arron shook his head in disbelief before he started.


"Once upon a time, there was a mosquito who kept irritating people. A boy didn't want to be bitten and used his insect repellent. The mosquito then fainted. The end."

Smiling, he tucked Zoe in and kissed her forehead. "Goodnight, Zoe."


okay i know i have tons of unfinished stories out there ><

lols my bad. sorry.

anyways. let me say this before i continue on anything...

this idea kinda popped outta no where. and i mean it.

as much as i want to steal Kim Jaejoong from all of you and write this as a story of him and me,

i'm gonna dedicate my first story on AFF to bebu, who got me into fangirlism.

ahhh... i'll be using Arron's real name here. unless majority of the comments would want me to use Yan Ya Lun.

don't mind me, but being uber biased now, Kim Jaejoong might appear often. :P

now... as i said. it's a random idea that i'm starting on, with no planning. so i have no idea how long this would last. i'm...not a good writer too. please bear with me XP

 
feel free to ask me questions and gimme critics! because i know that i drag my stories A LOT and tend to write really confusing stuff.

i might not update much... since i currently don't have my own computer and inspirations...can run rather low. i'm so sorry about that.

2 questions that i'd like you to answer first....

1. Arron Yan Ya Lun or Arron Wu Geng Lin?

2. comment replies at the bottom of each chapter, on your wall, or in the comment box?

 

xoxo,

meeeyi.

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IsabelleT
#1
Chapter 1: Hi new reader here!
Your story is super cute!!!
Keep updating!
grace_leeu #2
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luvinFLH4eva #3
LOL<br />
when did u start this...<br />
ur seriously random! LOLs.. mosquito and the boy wif insect repellent~ lols...<br />
love the bebu idea tho! <br />
<3<3<3<3 i love youuuu :P lols <br />
im bored tooo<br />
ps..freezing too
Celine- #4
O.O.The description sounds really interesting, subscribing, update soon eh? xD.