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Hi! I'm SHINeeVIPBJ1. This is my first time ever doing anything like this, but I assure you I will give you my honest and true opinion on any piece of writing you throw at me. Now, I have to warn you, the review you get may have not been what you expected. But that's ok,there is always room for improvement (; don't take anything I say to heart but keep it in mind for future stories, m'kay? On a side note, call me donsaeng. The reason why I made a review shop is because I love reading stories and I've always wanted to tell the author how I would put a certain chapter or phrase for another book they would like to make in order to make it more appealing, so this is my chance to do so. I have nothing else to say but ... Enjoy your review. - Donsaeng

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☁ Foreword & Description : 0/20 

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☁ Flow : 0/15 

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Foreword

I think it'd be a great honor to be able to influence someone's joy

- Lee Chaerin

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KatyMikayla
#1
Chapter 14: Awww, sad day xD hahaha, but you told me about this, lmfao xD
shy_rabbit
#2
☁username : shy_rabbit

☁profile link :http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/274747

☁story title : Strawberry Ice-Cream

☁story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/316232/strawberry-ice-cream-romance-you-jongup-bap-daehyun-bapandyou

☁genre/mood : Romance School

☁short summary : You meet some more friends after the first few weeks of school, you get along with them very well. You one day get a text, a text u never expected
Maudmoonshine #3
Chapter 12: Thank you so much for that kind review!~ i appreciate it a lot and thank you so much for sharing your insights :) and i agree with that 'small things come in small packages' thing..

aand yeah. I just like to say that these kind of things actually does happen. i just sort of gory-fied it a bit for fictional purposes.. But please, don't think that I ever wish it to happen to anyone especially to our idols. I was cringing the whole time i was writing it. XD

Would it be alright if i credit you in the foreword tomorrow? I am in my phone right now... I promise to get to it as soon as i can.
:)
Maudmoonshine #4
You might be busy right now, but please I'm not in any rush, okay? Thanks in advance!~ :D

☁username : Maudmoonshine

☁profile link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/168628

☁story title : Everyday is a Sunday Evening

☁story link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/270340/everyday-is-a-sunday-evening-angst-creepy-eunhyuk-henrylau-psychological-superjunior-twoshot

☁genre/mood : Angst or violence

☁short summary : Henry and Eunhyuk were traumatized by a crazy fan

Thanks again!~
jokerkkhe22
#5
Chapter 10: Thanks thanks ! Huft, I actually feel relieved, even though I get a very low score, but at least I know what's wrong with my story. Guess I will edit manyyy things. Did I use korean words ? I don't remember though. Even though I don't too agree with you in the foreword thingy. Thank you ! Let me love you ! XD Just kidding ! I will credit youuuuu !
im-so-curious
#6
Chapter 6: Hey thank you so much for reviewing :)
It was really good to get an unbiased opinion, thank you!
Also, I completely agree with you about it sounding choppy, I was actually thinking this myself and was debating whether to edit it a bit and your advice has made my decision definite :)
Just a side note:- I am very pleased with my score but shouldn't it add up to 87? Or is my maths really bad? :p haha
Thanks again, I will recommend your review shop if I see anyone wanting a good, honest opinion from someone who knows what they're talking about :)
FxGenerationLover
#7
Chapter 5: 94? woaaaahhh <3 let me love you down! <3 THANKS!
I'll put this in my story and credit you~ thank you so much!
starliet
#8
Chapter 4: Whoa.
I was not expecting a 90
A 70 maybe... but a 90?
Wow, thank you~! I will credit once I'm off of my phone c:
smolder
#9
Chapter 3: Wait... just wondering, but shouldn't the total be 96?
Sorry, I just noticed :P
smolder
#10
Chapter 3: Omo!
Wow, I actually didn't expect such a good review.
Thank you so much!

I'll keep your opinions in mind when I update my story :)