I Will Follow You Into the Dark

Random Pieces

Heads up~ Oh, and thank you if you're reading this. I update about once a week, and I usually add at LEAST three chapters. So, yeah. Bombing you with updates, psh, no biggie. And this chapter was based on a song by Death Cab for Cutie. I suggest listening to it a few times and listening to it while reading this chapter. (click on le link... >>> ) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LfNVfiqKBeM

 

 

 

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She skipped down the hill,

 

Path long-ago abandoned

 

 

 

"A turn here,

Cross the narrow river

Down the hill to the meadow..." she sang.

 

 

 

The girl swung around the willow tree,

 

Blithe and brightly smiling but,

that single lace-bound shoe twisted in roots enchanted and vines possessed.

 

And down she fell.

 

 

 

 

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Day had passed and she had not returned to her love.

 

Night had fallen and stars afloat in the black ocean

 

He left with a single oil lamp.

 

He ran own the hill,

 

Path long-ago abandoned.

 

 

 

"A turn here,

Cross the narrow river

Down the hill to the meadow..." he thought aloud.

 

 

 

He swung around the willow tree,

Maddened by her absence and frantic but,

that single lace-bound shoe twisted in roots enchanted and vines possessed.

 

And down he fell.

 

 

 

"If there's no one behind you when your soul embarks, then

I will follow you into the dark..." the wind sang.

 

 

 

The woods gave way,

 

And dark parted as the willow tree was brought to life by flames.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Phew. I'm so glad that people are reading this.... IT MAKES MY DAY KNOWING PEOPLE TAKE THE TIME TO READ MY CRUMMY PIECES OF UNACCEPTABLE WRITING~

 

 

 

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WicketCriminals
#1
Chapter 4: about your question. Yes i have cried myself to sleep, and woken up with dried tears....its sad i know. But i am not the only one who does it, i know that as well. btw im still reading ur chqapters! so far my favorite one is chapter 4..? i think...it's about the girl with the knife. its sad. buti like it lol
WicketCriminals
#2
Chapter 2: I like this poetry!! I barely like alot of authors writing on this site but yours imprssed me so far!! I'm a deep writer so I like it when ppl post poetry it writing like this <33 I'm not done reading all so far though!
Indubutably
#3
Chapter 2: Dude. I found this while strollin' through the angst tag. I like the first one.