love hurts

Crazy love

IN THE PRACTICE HALL 

aaron and hebe were practicing there last scene in which the girl will leave the boy for the sake of his god parent's happiness {yes there story was quiet similar to the play}.

aaron - sunshine why are you doing this to me 

hene - jay,what am i doing i said i don't love you 

aaron - really then say that nothing happen to you when i touch you *with that he hold her*

hebe felt a bolt of electricity it was like aaron was'nt acting he was talking to hebe

hebe - no ,i felt nothing

aaron - you don't feel anything when i come closer to me *he blows on her neck*

hebe felt tickle in her spine 

hebe - no 

aaron - you don't love it when i kiss you*and he kissed her*

hebe - no no no i don't feel anything at all

aaron was having tears in his eyes

aaron - ok sunshine i will leave you,just give one answer to my question did you ever loved me,even for a moment a while 

hebe was crying already she felt a lump in  

hebe - no ,i did'nt not for a second not for a moment,meeting you was the biggest mistake of my life 

aaron then turned and left 

then the show ended 

every team mate was cheering them for theri good acting what they don't know ,that they were not acting

aaron came to the beach and met ella there

aaron - ella i am sorry i rejected you 

ella - it's ok arron ,i am glad u did it if u have'nt done that i would'nt have felt true love

aaron - really you found yourself a guy ,i am happy

ella - don't be,he is marrying

aaron - you love chun right

ella - how do you know

aaron - i saw it in your eyes

ella - you also love hebe

aaron - yes,funny right both of us fall for the wrong person 

ella - no the person was right the timing was wrong 

aaron - right ,well atleast someone is happy

what they don't know is they are wrong

chun was drinking alcohol and hebe was crying her eyes out on her parent's grave 

four of them were broken

was it their fault or of their crazy hearts for letting them fall the wrong person at the wrong time?

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KimSasaeng #1
seems interesting
pandawriter #2
this is nice!
mtrueninja
#3
ahh! cutee! they all live happily! <33
mtrueninja
#4
wow!! lots of updates today! (=<br />
ahahs..<br />
omgg.. chunella's love is so complicated.. ahahs.<br />
bebu<3<br />
ahhas
sunshine #5
my story is reaching it's end<br />
i have'nt got comments :( <br />
don't you people like it<br />
should i complete it or not
sunshine #6
i hope you people like my story,if you have any suggestions for me.feel free to say
mtrueninja
#7
poor ella. she loves aaron so much but he doesn't notice. Ella, wait for your real prince charming, Chun.. <33 update soon!<br />
sunshine #8
thanx guiwang_4ever for you support i will update the rest of the story tomorrow.till then keep reading and keep giving comments thank you<br />
mtrueninja
#9
omg. update soon! (=
mtrueninja
#10
bebu<3 chunella<3 ahahs. update soon! I can't wait to read more!