Chapter 2: This story touched me to the bottom of my heart, it was really deep, meaningful and just beautiful. The character's interactions with one another, especially Leeteuk's and Donghae's, his and Eunhyuk's, were very moving and realistic. Your style is lovely, it brings out the feeling in every moment. I am literally tearing.:)

Chapter 2: I loved the style of this story. The way it was organized and the descriptions of everything were wonderful, not to mention how it all led up to the ending.
I find myself liking this one quite a lot (as well as your baekyeol writers oneshot). The concept is wonderful and isn't it amazing what we can create with a bout of inspiration?
Thank you for writing this, it's wonderful.

Chapter 2: Ahww It was soo nice!!!! I love it!!! :D

Chapter 2: damn these onions

Chapter 2: I just discovered your stories and I loved them all, but this one , I have no words for this ones is just deep and meaningful.

Chapter 2: Wow, this is really good! I'm so glad I read it.

I love everything about this story (not that I loved Donghae's father dying, but I think you'll know what I mean.) I adore how you wrote it, and I loved the scene changes.

I haven't read about extended relatives acting like this (although I'm certain it does happen in real life) so it was an interesting concept for me.

I love how Donghae spent his time talking to Hyukjae, and how you wrote Jinki and Jungsu.

I love how you wrote Donghae. His character is so intelligent and melancholic. You did a brilliant job with him.

Your characters are so alive (even the unconscious ones)! I'm very impressed.

I loved the mention of degrassé. I felt that when one of my pets died and it got me thinking. It terrified me, so I really respect how Donghae handled it.

I really liked how you wrote the ending. I'm happy that Jungsu didn't interrupt them like I thought he was going to.

You did a brilliant job with this! I really enjoyed reading it.

~Wishes of health and happiness,
雪のカラ

Ugh, this is so amazing. I'm really blown away - I even cried. Thanks for the amazing read!

Chapter 2: Its cool that Hyukjae woke up, but it is very interesting that his father dies the same time he woke up. You wrote it so well. The story really pulls you in.

Chapter 2: Woah, that was crazy. I love all these type of stories that make you think. I'm glad Hyukjae woke up, I honestly thought you were going to off Hyuk as well as Hae's appa and leave him with the heartache but my god am I thankful that he salvaged some happines from this. How can you write so fluidly in every story? It truly astounds me, seriously :)

Chapter 2: This fic is so deep. <3 after this I actually went to read the dictionary of obscure sorrows. Hahahahah. Great job!