Extraordinary Pineapple

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Description

Sungmin’s real smile disappeared a long time ago, leaving a fake behind. Will anybody be able to spot the difference?

 

 

Title: Extraordinary pineapple

Prompt: Pineapple
Pairing: Sungmin x Shindong
Rating: Pg
Genre: Angst, friendship, comfort
Word count: 1425

Foreword

 

A part of my writing challenge

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Please leave a comment and let me know what you think :)

 

 

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sujuminnie #1
Chapter 1: You did a great job in using the "commoner" issue in your story... You can actually sometimes see that sungmin gets hurt with the other members comments about him but you can also sometimes see that they themselves realized that sung min was hurt and try to give him apologetic looks.
nyatche #2
Chapter 1: this fic is really sweet and cute!Poor Ming :(
yesungxbiased
#3
Chapter 1: Awww~, sweet Donghee. And poor baby Minnie. Dx
TamedWildCatMel #4
Chapter 1: I love Donghee. People seem to forget him alot. Sungmin is awesome! I bet when Yesung goes to the Army, Sungin will goine KRY, he can sing, and it's the only sub-group he isn't a part of, outside EnuHae.
XiaoMei17
#5
Chapter 1: Ohmygosh, I love this!! Though I'm finding out that I love all of your fics! XD You're really freaking good at portraying emotion! It's always so beautiful! :D
I really hope none of the members feel this way! I love them all so dearly and SJ wouldn't be the same without any of them! D: I hate fans who bash any of the members, I truly do!!
blackneo
#6
Chapter 1: Aww~ This is sweet. Finally, I found out a DongMin fic. U've just made my day. I really really love it?? Would u mind if i translated it into Vietnamese and take it with full credit?? My friend is a huge DongMin shipper, too and I'd love to show her this fic.
ExoticELF125
#7
Chapter 1: This is the sweetest yet saddest story I've read here so far! Why would my bias, my Minnie, feel worthless??!! He is so amazing, and he definitely talented in EVERYTHING!!
(Sorry Sorry for the rant. I know this story isn't true, but it just pulled at my heartstrings so much!! </3)
Eunmai
#8
This was so sweet.. I have never viewed Sungmin as worthless, quite the opposite, actually! Whenever there has been a challenge in the shows he appeared on, he just cleared them, with no seeming effort.. I remember watching EHB and thinking: "Is there anything, this man cannot do?"
DevilUna
#9
Awe! It's cute ^^'