What happens a year later when they have to face everything left unsaid.
Foreword
My first story. Hope you guys like it. Its one of my favorite pairings and there arent enough onsica stories here yet. Enjoy! Constructive criticism is welcome and needed. :D <3
i love it~! <br />
but i was like 'wat the' when someone said 'CUT'<br />
hell, they were just acting actually -____-<br />
pls make a sequel, i'll definetly subscribe, as long as it's onsica or onew in it,kk
My heart dropped when i saw that CUT! And I was like O_O. Hahaha,but the story on the music video is really nice. Will you make a sequel for this? Yes? Thank you! Keke. Wish you would. PM me if you would kay? This is really awesome. Good job,Unnie? <3
omg i loved that!<br />
the 'cut' thing was just epic. XD <br />
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Glad to see another onsica shipper around!<br />
you are so right about how this place needs more fics XD on onsica<br />
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;D hwaiting on your next ones .;)
well..<br />
iit was great how u played with my though...thinking that it is gonna be like other sweet love story..<br />
until i read that 'cut' word.....<br />
kkkkkkkk ^^<br />
cant wait for ur next ^^
Wow. That was great. Especially when the story shifted to a music video. I mean, first I was like, were they together for real but then it was just great acting. I was deceived. Niiiiiiiiice. As for criticism, the visuals are good. How you portray the story is told well. There are few grammatical errors but it's really alright. ^^ <br />
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Yay Onsica shipper~
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