Something Right

Description

“Ah! That expression! You've got someone, didn’t you?”


‘He’s someone i.. well, had a crush on.’


My life is incomplete...


 

How i wish you wanted to be with me longer, how i wish it wasn’t him.


if only i had met you sooner...

 

 

.:Credits for the graphics goes to S&M Pleasure Graphics :.

P.S : you should check it, really, it provides great art !  :D

 

Thanks to BananaMilk21 for the title suggestion :3 keke~

Foreword

some jongyu fic that plopped in my mind ._.

it's going to be chaptered, but i don't think it would be as long as FL.

 

oh well, it's angst but no bloody scene, no charadeath or something, just a plain sorrowful plot.

don't really feel like writing a brighter story anyway, keke

 

Some chapter will be rated for the language use, not ^^ well i'm not 100% sure that there wont be any~

 

Typo(s), grammatical error and unsuitable words here and there, feel free to tell me how much i messed up >< *but don't be such a meanie, i can't take it ><*

 

This has been theslymaknae, over and out. :)

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Jongtae_SHINee_Minke
#1
Chapter 11: Beautifully written but still somehow sad ?
lacus_clyne
#2
Chapter 11: this is hurt so much
i can't take it
i'm crying read this
anticlimatic
#3
Chapter 11: This is a great fic. However, I like Onew and Jonghyun together... T^T Anyway, keep on writing! You're really good! Fighting!
Forever-A-MVP
#4
Chapter 11: What?! You made Key and Onew together?! Like wtf?! Urgh! ㅠㅠ
HollowPearl
#5
Chapter 11: Oh my, I started crying. It's amazing, so much emotion you put into it. It's so sad that they had to break up. Anyway, it's an awesome story my dear, I enjoyed reading it and keep up the good work. Fighting!! <33
vieroeclipse #6
Chapter 11: Yaaa.... akhirnya jongyu gak bisa bersatu ya? sedih deh endingnya... T_T
Tapi emang relistisnya begitu sih. Mereka gak bisa saling memaksakan juga. T_T

Ya, semoga aja Onew bisa sepenuhnya nerima Key. Sama halnya dengan Jongtae.

Great ending! Walaupun sbnrnya terlalu cepet sih buat berakhir, tapi aku paham kok sama kesibukanmu. Smoga di next fic bisa lbh totalitas lagi ya! :D

Good luck buat mid testnya! :3
jonghyunism #7
Chapter 10: oh lord. things are just getting harder for jongyu
vieroeclipse #8
Chapter 10: Haduuuuuhhhh.... masalahnya jadi tambah runyam. Ortunya Key juga bermasalah pula. Itu aku ampe mendelik di bagian terakhir. Jongyu already had . O____O"

Alurnya jadi makin gak terduga. Kayaknya kok makin jauh dari happy ending... haduuuhhh... T__T

Great chapter!! Makasih ya udah diupdet! :D
deadbodies
#9
what does the title mean?