Can I Meet Him ?

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can you imagine when you growing up, you just know that you have a brother. but you can`t find your brothers coz he is lost until now. you really miss him.  

in the fact, it happen coz  your father stole him from your arms.

 

will you meet him? with so much problem around you. life without affection from your 'true parents'.

will you life happily ever after in this unfair world.

how you go through your life? your love story? and the most important, your family problem 

Foreword

This is my first fiction. I`m a big enemy of grammar. so, i will mess it up.

MIANHAE... I really sorry about that

 

dear the readers and the subscribers. i hope you enjoyed this story.

your comment its my pleasure and cheer me up to improve my skills.

 

This Story dedicated for :

- My Lovely oppas of SHINee

- the one of oppas in SHINee... MY Lovely Yoeboe...ONEW

-My friends

- Of course, the majesty the readers and the subscribers

 

 

THANK YOU SO MUCH

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chara_aia #1
Lee Taemin >.<<br />
Their "official" first meeting and they're already fighting over strawberry milk LOL<br />
Easy there kids, I got more strawberry milk here, other flavors also available *I just decided to open a milk stand next to that stall, already earning a glare from the stall's ajumma >.<
nitrizki #2
I have the exam to.. X( ok curious with the next chapter..
chara_aia #3
poor Onew<br />
he wanted to see Jinhae but he can't<br />
he shouldn't think too much and just dash out to her place >.<<br />
goodluck with your exam ^.^
chara_aia #4
okay, so she has a brother but her father took him away<br />
hmmm... I wonder who he is.. wait, I think I know, kekeke<br />
it's getting more interesting<br />
and I agree with nitrizki, the pictures help me get into the story easier<br />
it wouldn't be a bad idea to put some song as the backgroud of your story too<br />
sorry for being too demanding ^.^v<br />
anyway, waiting for next update<br />
fighting ^.^
nitrizki #5
The jinhae room its 13. ouh its sounds creepy. update soon.
nitrizki #6
You have two secret boys? The temperament ones and the tallest ones. Who are they? It's so curious. Updating. And last please put many pict again so it's make me easily to imagine how it's going. But that's only my order. Don't take any attation for the last sentence. Hehe :)
chara_aia #7
hmm, Jonghyun like her don't he? hihihi<br />
anticipating next chapter<br />
fighting ^.^
nitrizki #8
you make it this very interesting. kept updating. .
chara_aia #9
I like how the story going so far<br />
well, there's a lil' bit gramatical errors here and there, but that's okay<br />
we'll improve as we practice, rite<br />
I'll look forward to the next chapter ^.^
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