Fate

Description

Dara loves Jiyong. It's too late. Jiyong doesn't love her back. Her battle with cancer is weakening. Dara's weakening. She can't go on. When Jiyong finally falls for her. She's Gone.

Foreword

"Jiyong-ah, Saranghae" Dara blushed.

"Kekekek, alright then Rabbit, I'm going to meet my girlfriend, wanna come?"

Daras face fell.

"U-um, I-I can't, I have to go!" Dara said.

Tears flew down her face.

Her stomach churned with pain.

Her blood wasn't flowing properly.

"Jiyong-ah, saranghae" She whispered.

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tonnettie #1 Jul 6, 2013 20:47:26

Chapter 6: Why are so good in making sad stories?! Please this should be your last sad story please?

Vampielicious #2 May 4, 2013 23:54:50

Chapter 6: So what's the ending? I just cry here.. So saaaaaddd!!

tashamc #3 Oct 7, 2012 05:03:13

sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad! im crying right now! please dont make another sad story because( no offence ) you are really good at it.

xcherryblossomx #4 Aug 29, 2012 01:51:54

Thankyou <3

enidlenej #5 Aug 29, 2012 01:12:23

So sad <3 but beautiful.

xcherryblossomx #6 Aug 23, 2012 01:57:47

Thankyou you so much for your support! Thanks for reading! Annyeong~ <3

dasmi93 #7 Aug 22, 2012 11:53:05

I can't wait for the stories you'll write in the future ^^

charmillesenica #8 Aug 22, 2012 11:50:46

I love all of it! The story, the way it made me cry. All as in all. Even if Jiyong's a jerk here. Hehehe. I'll wait for your new story! Fighting!

xcherryblossomx #9 Aug 22, 2012 01:22:04

Thankyou so much for your comment! It helped me a lot to see what points I need to work on. I'm really glad you enjoyed. I will make sure my future stories will be up to your standard! Annyeong! ^.^

dasmi93 #10 Aug 21, 2012 23:06:03

I liked the plot and everything (I cried - but I cry too easily for everything -.-)
...even though I cried, the story was a little hard to understand
...it was a little confusing.
Furthermore the story came quickly to an end and I wished you would have explained and described more about their feelings..
and about the cancer she had - it's not realistic enough that the doctor tells her 3 days before she dies, how much time she has before she finally goes to heaven.
I would have described more about her suffering and about her illness. (about hiding her love for Jiyong and her chemotherapy)

Anyhow the story was lovely, even without a happy end ^^
I enjoyed reading it :)

oh and sorry for the critic :(