Family Problems

Description

Jae Moon ran down the dark hall of the warehouse.

He knew he would be killed this time so why not play out the rest of his life?

Men in black suits chasing him.

Every one panting hard, except for the small child in his arms.

Hyuk Jae.

The boy had been born one year and five months ago.

Hard to accept the fact that Mi Ha would be a single mother now.

Foreword

Uh... Don't be mad If this isn't the best planning I've done... I was watching "In Time" (great movie) and I just all of a sudden screeched

"I MUST WRITE A MAFIA FIC!!"

I don't know if it should be rated now so I'll just individually rate chaps.

When I update but theres no new chap, read the comments from the author!!

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257471 #1 Jan 19, 2014 10:43:34

Chapter 16: Ohhh my, i'm curious...
wanna know the next story...

charrellx #2 Oct 9, 2012 04:13:50

Chapter 17: hmm.. well its upto you
i feel like if you transfer it to another author it wouldnt be as good.. or the same D:

but its really upto you, wait till your life calms down.. no matter how long it takes xD then come back~

eastcandle90 #3 Oct 8, 2012 23:31:19

Chapter 17: just continue......i want to know the rest of the story from you...please...*puppy eyes*

Ucant-stop-lovingme #4 Oct 4, 2012 17:39:09

OMG WHATS HAPPENING WITH HYUKKIE ?? Im panicking !! Oh and it's ok school and health are much important ! We'll wait for ya !

Saranghae

charrellx #5 Oct 1, 2012 03:40:43

Chapter 16: ahh.. thats going to be so long
but school and health is more important!

why would you leave us for so long with such a cliffhanger D:
and omg how did you come up with that sort of dream.. genius :O

i wonder whats happened to hyuk T.T so worried about him
those dang daisies ¬¬

ahh anyway, i do hope you take alot of time to rest and DONT FEEL PRESSURED to update at all, okay?
everyones busy with school and work now, especially me ¬¬ so we understand, well the people who write do

well anyway, great update! ^^

charrellx #6 Sep 28, 2012 17:39:13

Chapter 15: ;A; ... idk where to start tbh
OH. MY. GOD.
AMAZING
HYUKJAE IS SO BADASS..
YOU ADDED TOP AND THE TROUBLE MAKER COUPLE.. HOT!
CAR CRASH..!!!!
im dying okay

i really love every bit and every inch of this fic.. so amazing.. and i love how you write, so refreshing.. like drinking cold water after excersizing *excuse my lame comparing to im really thirsty rn*

but im wondering.. this story is going to be HAEHYUK right?.. nothing much has really happened between the two but it seems to me that its going more on the hyukhae side..

oh well i wouldnt mind hyukhae as long as the story line is great and this story line AND story is great so yay cookies for you!!

i hope your leg/yourself is okay now ;A; and please dont feel pressured to update, if you dont have the time or the ideas dont..

like rn i have the time and ideas i just cant put them in words so im not updating my fic /KEEP IT A SECRET BETWEEN US, 'IGHT?

anyway, NO PRESSURE, but i cant wait to see what happens next omg ajhklanjkcbna UPDATE SOON!

-both thumbs up for you-

charrellx #7 Sep 28, 2012 16:45:03

Chapter 8: OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY F-ING GOD
you know what.. im just going to comment whenever i like because OH MY GOD
delete the comments later if you want but first of:
kyuwook? really? REALLY? ARE YOU REALLY TRYING TO KILL ME?

kyuwook is one of my ultimate otps.. author-san.. i love you so much ;A;

and omg ____S ABOUT TO GO DOWN
I CAN FEEL IT

i had a spazz attack on my mattress when hae called hyuk his boyfriend
UWAAA #U#

and jealous heechul OMG
OMG DYING

charrellx #8 Sep 28, 2012 16:29:07

Chapter 7: author-san just why are you like this???? ;A;
SIHANTEUKCHUL?? ARE YOU BASICALLY TRYING TO KILL ME?
and the f-ucking make out session... gotdamn gotdamn!
and thanks for adding ryeowook in this story.. omg i love him okay
this is why i shouldve been here from the start! >:(

ill stop my random comments now asjklnKLFNJJISAFN BYE