Saving You

Description

This is actually a one-shot I wrote for a challenge...

Lee Donghae worked at Bishounen Cafe which is full of stunning and charming waiters...

Each of the waiter (idols to be exact)  has their own stories...

And as for me...I chose Lee Donghae...

So, here it goes....

Foreword

They say love cannot save someone from their own fate. But can Lee Donghae changes that and save the woman he loves from her terrifying nightmares?

 

Disclaimer: Although I wish I own Lee Donghae, but unfortunately no. I owned only the plot and Lee Donghae belongs only to himself.

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samasbananas
#1
This is ~cute! :3
puffy_fluffy_clouds #2
How cute and well written! I love it! ^ ^ ..especially the fun of imagining Donghae in a waiters uniform and apron XD <3
jiayixdubu #3
Its very rushy..but its nice. =D
angex99 #4
i really liked your story compared with others that are more "popular" than your's :because you didn't use complicated sentences that nobody would beside yourself; i actualy laughed at the 'She no longer looked like Mike Tyson or Muhammad Ali' part (some people may actually understand it),i also like it because you didn't insist on the "beatings" part,so it didn't bore me , or worse to make me wish she died in one of the "boxing rounds"...<br />
one of my favorite things about this story is the fact that you kept the reason or more likely the "demon" in the shadows...(ok, it might be because it's 12 o'clock here and i'm sleepy:D)but i really thought that it's a supernatural story..enough already with my blaberring:D<br />
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So to be honest....your story made my day :D
runaway928 #5
I found it pretty cute & interesting. <br />
Take your time to read more fanfics, it helps with ideas and English. (: <br />
I liked it, good job for your first time!<br />
:D