this is the second of heesica fanfic of yours that i already read. i'll read the others after this

this story is so addicted. how i wish heesica is really addicted to each other in real life

please share more

I will always love Heesica, and I think this is quite a well executed fanfic. I love the hint of dark romance, though personally I think you could have added more "twisted"ness in it. That's only my personal preference though. This one shot is already fine the way it is. And stylistically, I'm actually torn between disliking and liking two of your symmetrical paragraphs when you described Jessica's feelings to Heechul and vice versa. It can get a little redundant, however I also realize that might have been the effect you intend to show, and if it is, it's okay. I love symmetrical writing, though I think you could vary the choice of words more in those two paragraphs. I hope I don't sound like a , because I tend to be slightly more critical with a good and potential fic, and yours is, so...yeah. :)

And write more Heesica, if you can? *batting eyelashes

gosh i just love the way u write and now i'm an addict of ur stories. waiting for ur next heesica and seokyu