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Description

fire, fireflies!

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( graphics ) ( reviews ) ( outfits ) ( pretty stuff ) ( freebies )

created on: 16th July 2012

created by: HudaCheesecake & -alive

head of the graphics area: -alive

head of reviews area: Hudacheesecake

head of clothing area: none

under construction. please wait for further updates. thank you.

( open ) ( under construction ) ( busy ) ( hiring ) ( hiatus )( closed )

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updates, and info

shop re-opened on: 1st May 2013

Foreword

The Review Scheme

Title (10%): Just how 'common' was your title? Is it a diamond in the rust? Is it unique and eye catching? Does your title even fit with the story?

Poster/Background (5%): Who said these matter so much? I'm kidding -sort of. How well did your poster match your story, did it match the background? Was it coordinated?

Blurb -in other words, foreword/description (10%): How well did you hint to the reader's the plot? Did you give it away too obviously? Did you write it too long, or too short? How well did you hint the readers what the characters were like?

Plot (20%): How unique was the plot? Was it one of a kind? Was it too common or was it cliché? Plots may seem different at first, but they tend to be the same in the end - this loses the interest of a potential reader! Get them back!

Fluidity (15%): How smooth was your story going? Did it make sense? Was the story plot racing down the track or snailing it to get to the or main part of the story?

Grammar, Spelling(20%): This is important, grammar and spelling can lose readers! It becomes difficult for them to understand what you want to say and explain. So, do you need to improve, and by how much?

Vocabulary(15%): How wide was your vocabulary? Did you have elaborate and appealing words that didn't turn the story frilly? Or, did you repeat words so often the story became dull for the reader?

Comment (5%): This is the reviewers own opinion and advice for you to improve, it's graded far more leniently. It will tell you how the reviewer felt whilst reading.

Overall (%): The story is graded in percentages funnily enough! It's easier that way.

O U T F I T E X A M P L E S

H U D A C H E E S E C A K E ♘

- A L I V E

R U L E S

1. Subscribe before or after applying! People who do not subscribe shall not get their request done.

2. Please comment (on the blog post) your request so we can ensure that you have requested.

3. Criticism is allowed - Bashing, however, is strictly forbidden!

4. Tell us if you want your request canceled (within 48 hours) and/or if you have deleted your story.

5. The request waiting will be done in certain circumstances, please check below.

6. You may ask for a redo, but please ask politely.*

7. Credit must be given in event of graphics and reviews. All credits (preferably) should be posted on the foreword. Graphics should be used for a minimum of 3 months, you are allowed to request from other shops after that, but the credit should still remain there.

8. Please don't delete your story if it was given a harsh review, we'll keep an eye on it and see just how much it improves!

9. Personally, passwords are just too much of a hassle. We base each and every request on trust.

That's about it, for now, at least.

LENGTH OF REQUESTS:

GRAPHICS: Depending on what, 7-10 days for a poster (only one of us is making them)

OUTFITS: At least two days, if not, a week.

REVIEWS: Depends on length of story, but probably a week.**

*Re-do's are mainly for graphics (sometimes) and outfits. Reviews are not possible-they are for your benefit. And if we find you annoying, you don't get a redo. Tough luck.

**If requests are not fulfilled by then the reviewer or outfit maker will inform you, it is either because:

a) We didn't have the time

b) We've made it but have not posted it, yet.