The Smaller Star

Description

She only believed in the bigger star

He only looked at the bigger star

She raced across the galaxies

He ran after the brilliance

She lost her way

He lost his purpose

They didn't remember the smaller star

 

 

Foreword

This is going to be Woomi. Sorry if you don't like the pairing, but they're just adorable.

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Eririn #1
Oh and I forgot to mention earlier how bad I feel for Bomi. It must really hurt to be her :(
Eririn #2
Chapter 3: I love this story so far. Please update soon.
crazyfreakygirly #3
Chapter 3: I guess my comment is a wee bit late for this but do update soon please!
nicorobin
#4
I hope you continue this story if you have time :)
TheDreamer
#5
Chapter 3: I really like this! update soon plz:-)
azuraes #6
Chapter 3: Interesting, hope you update soon :))
Snoopnut98 #7
Chapter 3: Hi yo:D I've actually read this once before and didn't comment , but I hope you update soon:D The story is really beautiful in way although WooHyun behaved like a jerk>:(! It's like you can kind of feel what each character feels by the way you use and phrase your words:D It's like awesome!!! Anyway, WooHyun seriously behaving like a selfish jackass and Bomi is too forgiving towards him:(!! But I hope you don't make this a angst fanfic:D although there's no such thing as happily ever after in real life, but hey, at least let them happen in fiction stories:D anyway, hope you have an awesome year ahead:) God Bless you too:D!! P.s even if you don't update soon, make sure to at least update okay :D? Your story is really mesmerizing in a way:>!!
sleepmaniac
#8
Chapter 3: Update soon~! ^^
Cuddlemex
#9
While reading this on my phone there were many instances (rather a lot actually) where I had to select a word and find its meaning.
I'm all for grammar and vocabulary but what's the point in using such big words that many readers will not understand in every sentence, you get what I'm saying?

I'm a big fan of your work, I loved maybe baby infinite and with that fic it was fine, like there were nice vocab and correct grammar but there were none excessively long and difficult words that many of us do not use on a regular basis (so therefore we are not familiar with it, there were words here that I think I saw for the first time ever).

I hope you take critism ok /)_(\ it just feels like you abused thesaurus too much on this.
Jinmae #10
Omg i just found this fic and i love it so much! Pleaseeeee update soon! :))