It doesn't matter that he's a celebrity. It doesn't matter that he's the leader of the famous pop group SHINee. None of it matters. He will always be fifth best in everyone else's eyes.
Chapter 1: Ahh wow this is a really awesome idea you're working on! I just saw this on indiekoreanfanfics and I'm glad I decided to read this, very interesting and well written. :)
Wow, this story is really good! The emotions were very clear and I could really feel as if Onew was talking to me. Also, it is well-written! I applaud you. Really I do. Furthermore, the way you compared the boys to the cards... Spot on! I can't even begin to tell you how relevant this story is to reality! Ok, now I'm not making sense.
Oh boy, I feel like this is going to end up giving me all kinds of sad and angsty feels me being an MVP T^T nyeeeh Onew I love you, you are important <3 lol, but at any rate outstanding characterization! :3 I'll be sure to follow this story closely. (BTW to readers, most writers are put off when the comments are cluttered with "Update soon!" messages as it makes them feel pressured. Keep that in mind when you comment on a story ^^)
Wow, the first chapter is amazing! I was able to hear - would that be he correct term? - Onew's voice talking to me as I read it. Amazing. Another thing: the way you portrayed Onew is excellent. I really like how he isn't preppy and always smiley - he acts like an actual person with negative feelings and deep-rooted thoughts. I really like it since I rarely see that Jinki. Also, I absolutely /love/ how you characterized each card and their "special meaning." And let's not forget how you incorporated the cards' symbolism-ish thing with the boys. I love it!
Well, I hope to see an update soon! (:
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