Let go...

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"I am trying to hold on to you, but you're slipping away like rampant wisps of smoke. I am starting to wonder how long can one love a memory."

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Park_HyeSun #1
Out of the stories I chose from you, I liked this the best. Great job! (:
SurmiiK #2
Chapter 1: that was just epic writing. this is so sweet and sad :( the poor guy x(
mrssoneelf
#3
Chapter 1: THIS WAS AMAZING.
janeykno
#4
Let me openly cry now...while I wish that this story was only a tad longer...but if it was it would ruin the greatness that is your writing...wahhh
krismealways
#5
omg what
i thought there'd be a happy ending ;-;
wjkfldssd
you did such a great job, kudos to you!!
FreakyliciousLil
#6
This Is really wonderful!
So well-written & sad !
<3
kioko_hihara
#7
*sobs* beautiful and tragic.. ^_________^
prncsjaz
#8
Oh God! TT_TT There's...I...I don't know what to say. A wonderful dream turned into a heartbreaking nightmare. I've had those before and they'd the worst but never like this. Thought my spirit would probably do that...try to get the love of my life to move on :(. Very well written Cezy. Good job.
prncsjaz
#9
Oh gosh that wasn't even an actual chapter and it gave me chills!!