Chapter 1: Aww so adorable ?I love them so much in this fictional❤

Chapter 1: So sweet ^^ Really good!

I feel worthless right now....If I'm not a lazy anymore I will re-write this...this fic was made 2010 and I wasn't aware of my grammars and just in case if you don't understand the picture in here. I just love this fic bcos the idea was crazy and yeah...I like to appreciate myself. Thank you for noticing my weakness I'll repair it if I want to. LOL

Hey I like the story, but I gotta be honest with u, not trying to be mean so don't take it in a bad k pls? Check the use of words, cause some of them don't make sense within the context. It just makes the sentence sound really awkward. But the story and idea is well done :)