Detective Park~

Description

Your roomate Kelly Monte has gone missing, and the one to tell you of her dissapearance is Detective Park. After being with Detective Park for a few hours, unknowingly he develops a crush on you.

Foreword

Hello, so i'm pretty new here... It is My First Fanfic and i hope you guys like it~ ^^

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yutoppang #1
Chapter 4: Firstly, congratulations on being the random featured story (2 days ago)! It's a great way for unknown authors like you to be in the spotlight at least once! :)
I like the plot of this story; Jay Park as a detective who is in the search of your friend/roommate for suddenly going missing and somehow falling in love with you. Very interesting plot indeed. I just find it a little odd how Jay suddenly fell in love because I would imagine detectives, especially FBI agents like Jay in this story, would have trust difficulties because of their field of work. That's why I was expecting a bit more action and such however good job overall!
Thank you for sharing your story with us! :)
Justmaili #2
Chapter 4: Congrats!!! This story was fun to read and tho it was short it was bery well written! i enjoyed reading it!!! *thumbs up*
aeternus #3
Congrats! :)
beamhazard #4
congrats~!
Taobooty #5
congrats!!
purplexo #6
congratulations^^
GDxtaengoo #7
Congratulations<3
BangtanGirls_ #8
congrats :)
yunjaekisseu #9
Congrats~!
xWuZiTao #10
congratulations
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